Movie night: Cracking the case Part II


Corine: Its simple, Ashely did it. 1

Policeman: Are you crazy she is de_2

Corine:: Let me speak Ashely is the only one that didn’t have bloody death. She is alive. 3

Marco: How do you know she is alive?4

Corine: Simple, I’m Ashley.( she took off her disguise)I am also Laundee and Caprea 5

Marco: Why did you do it Ashley?6

Corine (Laundee): I am really Luandee James, Jessica always took My spotlight. I was always the girl with the mental problems. I hated it Then I became Caprea, My name was so beautiful I thought people would love me.7

Police woman: You call that a beautiful name.8

Ashley (Laundee): shut it Or I will blast your brains out. Any way Jessica found out my middle name and because of the uni brow I HAD She called me hairy Mary. I was embarrassed. And then I came as Ashley, I had great friends, A cute boyfriend a_9

Marco: Thanks, I know everyone tells me, I think its my_10

Ashley (Laundee): Shut UP Any way, A cute boyfriend and everything a girl can dream about. And then Jessica saw I was hogging her spotlight so she did it. It is to harsh to tell. ( She started to so After I murdered All these kids I had to changed my identity. I became Corine, a quiet girl who got adopted into a family with a horrible sister. The second movie night is when I got someone to do my dirty work, Victoria, she was never mean to Mary, Ashley, and Laundee. 11

Marco: All this time it was an act 12

Ashley (Laundee): Yep, But I still like ya BOO ( she blasted their brains out) HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    June 13

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    Interesting

    Split personalities re always intertaining in movies but on paper they are a bit hard to keep up with, I can't see much future with this one.

  • the thermal hero
    November 16, 2008
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    First comment.Yay.this is sooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!good.