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Long ago in a land where creatures of the night did not have to hide, there lived a vampire named Mina.2
She was under the control of her master and creator Viktor. She hated being under his control and she hated much worst the craving to feed on blood. Long ago she tried to escape the control of Viktor but always knows her every move. Being her creator, the one that gave her the gift, that she feels is a curse, he can read her thoughts. Mina has been trying to learn the skills to block her thoughts but she get frustrated and her concentration breaks.3
Well one night, Mina was hunting her prey. She really hated taking a human but sometimes it was something that she could not avoid. Mina came across a man, but he was no ordinary man, that much she could tell. There was a strong attraction, a connection that they both could feel. The heated vibes radiated around them. Drawn together by a force much stronger then either could stop, a the slow sensual dance, their bodies entwined, lips locked in a fierce kiss. Mina had never felt anything quiet like this, a taste of passion so strong, it almost knocked her off her feet.4
Kulkin, was at a lost for words, the very site of her took his very breathe away. Pulled together like magnets, he begin to undress her. He could taste her hunger, a hunger that was as strong as his own, one that can not be satisfied by food. He could smell the desire, the aroma of her passion. Who needed food they feasted upon each other, he tasted the sweet honey of her breast. Lick and savored the sweet candy between her legs. Mina, a virgin to anything so wonderful as the feeling she was felling now. She was speechless, when Kulkin, drove home to her woman’s core, her world burst into a million tiny pieces. But it was not over yet, they could not seem to get enough of each other. Climax after climax, their mind, body and souls still hungered for more. They agreed to meet again, Mina and Kulkin both knew that their lives would never be the same. 5
Night after night, they met. They would talk and make love, she learned that he was an avatar, and he learned that she was a vampire controlled by Viktor, the very vampire that killed his parents. They both wanted freedom from their past demons, which revolved around Viktor. Kulkin, started teaching Mina how to channel her thoughts, to block her mind from Viktor. She was a quick study, Viktor claimed that she had been to incompetent to learn such a simple skill.6
Kulkin met Mina in their forest paradise as usual. But he told her that night that he would have to take a long journey, to see the world, to find his place in the world. He told Mina that he would send for her when he found that place. Mina cried begged and pleaded to go with him. He told her that she could not go, this is a quest that he must do his own, for she may distract, and he may never find that place. He promised that he would send for her and gave her a deep kiss. Mina pulled away and ran tears burning her eyes.7
A few weeks after Kulkin left, Mina found that she was with child. She hide it from Viktor for as long as she could, fearing that he would harm her child. A child from the man that she loved, whom she may never see again. 8
Viktor did find out about the child and he demanded to know the name of the father, so that he could kill that man brave enough the trespass on his property. Mina was stronger then she had ever been, she stood up to Viktor and refused to reveal her secret, it was as if she had another source of power to feed off, standing by her side. Viktor left her alone from that day forth and he knew that child in her stomach was going to be a force more powerful then his self. He feared that this child would be his downfall.9
Mina give birth to a baby boy, she named him Ratava. She dared not name him after his father, for Viktor would surely try to kill him. Sure enough Viktor started a search for a man named Ratava, he searched all across world, left no stone unturned. But no where could he find a man with the first or last name Ratava.10
Ratava was growing fast and learning his powers. He grew at a faster pace then most kids, because not only was he born a vampire but also half avatar. He all the powers of a vampire and avatar but none of their weaknesses. He did not have cravings to feed on humans or any aversion to sunlight. Mina watched her son as he grew and wondered if his father would ever come back. How long would it Viktor to figure out that Ratava was avatar spelled backwards, indirectly naming him after his father.11
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Comments
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Mina and Kulkin
Made love, and Kulkin taught her how to defeat Viktor...very nice write Goddess. It's late now, but will read the other two parts tomorrow. Interesting storyline[gee, I didn't even know that vampires could get pregnant!]. Can't wait to read the other two parts, I'm sure it only gets better.
I do have one suggestion, though, I think you should change your font to something more readable with your background, sometimes the white words on the white flesh were hard to read.
But still, it is a great write.
Brazos

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Magnificent Vampire Tale
You have captured me with this story, and I know there is more to this, I want the rest of this tale, told. It's so full of imagination, and fantasy you just can't stop here, Write ON!.......ennovy
overall: 8.

