My Prayer~~

For The Children   1

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Hear my spirit cry, see my crystal tears
Take their prayer of pain
Lord of lullabies, calm these children's fears
Shivering in the rain
Let them know, reasons why, you need her there
To see they're not to blame
For pains run deep, for such young hearts to bear
Show death is not in vain 3

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Let them see, just a glimpse, of rainbow hues
And sweet Mother's Garden
So their hearts, may see, their lives are not through
Let their hearts not harden
And may you comfort, their precious hearts blue
All future pains pardon
Letting them know, it's alright to love you
And they're not forgotten 5

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In their dreams, let them see, Mom's bright smiles
As she awaits her seeds
Up high, her garden spreads out for miles
Where she still often reads
Flowers worth most, she'll wait for awhile
But loves them dear indeed
And her soul up high, has no more trials
Her garden has no weeds 7

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Inscribed from my heart to these precious children
Much love, you all will be together again 9

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Author notes

Just wanted to write this for some children who lost their parents, they'll know what it is for! -Timothy

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  • SpydurPoet
    September 7
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    Awww. This is so incredibly beautiful. You really do have a bright and beautiful soul. I loved this.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Denerica
    January 2
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    Definately moved! We may tend to forget those who lost parents at a young age, I loved it all, and the way you ended it...there are no weeds in Mom's garden, and how she will wait for her seeds...I am an emotional heart felt person, so it really tugged at me. Blessings


  • rite
    November 8, 2008
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    I lost my dad at 23 and my mom at 47. I still miss them. We were close to two girls who lost their parents at a young age. What you eloquently penned in this poem are emotions that are very familiar. I am conviced your conclusion is correct. I hope many of these children find consolation in your words. Thank you for creating and sharing, dear friend.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    September 3, 2008

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    you sucker first of all i needed this to read this spiritual side Jehovah works in such mysterious ways honey. Secondly i soon to be purchasing the Ruby Macaw a very expensive bird crap the cage alone is about 400.00 the bird well mine will be 2,400 with them determining the sex i simply love this i shall do a background for this piece fix everything else are make it clear one must high light the content to read it


  • Jalalbad
    June 8, 2008
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    the birds are beautiful poeticweaver.

  • rite
    October 27, 2007

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    With our hands tied behind our back, forced to watch the agony, exploitation and abuse of the young and innocent as a result of the insane greed of the elite of this world, we must storm the heavens with our prayers, emotions and thoughts. Writings such as you placed here on this page will be precious to the heart of GOD. By expressing this you honor HIM and at the same time urge others to do what you did here in poetical form. Thank you for creating and sharing, dear Tim. It was good to have been on this page to see the good souls in this plane continue to communicate in a heartfelt way with The Light. Take care,

    Chris

  • Blue Rew
    June 2, 2007
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    A rainbow soul

    This piece is so tranquil & comforting. Such beautiful imagery of mom's garden and mom reading. The children you wrote this for are not alone in their gratitude for these words. They reach out and touch all who have ever lost someone they thought they would never be without. Blue


    • poeticweaver
      September 27, 2007
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      Thanks

      I appreciate you reading me,
      many blessing sweet sis. -hugs-


  • Cynthia Gaines
    May 20, 2007

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    Very Moving!!!

    Written from an angel's loving heart; this poem is so beautifully heart-and-soul-felt that it brought a tear to my eyes. Whoever the children are, may God be with them all. Peace and love ~ Cyn

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


    • poeticweaver
      September 27, 2007
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      Thanks

      I appreciate you reading me,
      many blessing sweet sis. -hugs-

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