Ive got a reason to kill you now

Let me get inside your head and fuck with you,
as you have done to me so many times.1

Let me cut you with these knives,
for revenge on your dumbass is what I want.2

FUCK YOU FOR KILLING ME3

I never thought things would get so raw
I know I have issues within myself
You know this side of me I never wanted to show
You arent all that innocent either
You couldnt tell the truth to save your fucking life.4

Let me rip off your skin inch by inch
piece by piece...as your looking around and realizing you are alone.5

FUCK YOU FOR KILLING ME!6

Author notes

This is an old one, I wrote this after a really bad break up, but I never got to say this to one certain person, so maybe he will come across this. I hate you billy. I am doing much better now, Adam is the most amazing person in the world. I love you babes.

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  • Hearts Content
    January 4, 2007
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    a;sldkfj

    I've seen a lot of emotional pain in my life, not personally, but I spent a few years observing and analyzing. This is the affinity of all of that pain. Kudos, once more.

    p.s. I hope you're still with Adam, and that Billy gets his nuts ripped out and stapled to his forehead.

    beginning: 2, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.