Chapter 1-Present1
I'm here, sitting in a class I have no use for.... Three hundred years, I have no need for schooling, but walking the street, during the day, and I kept getting yelled at for not being at school. Three hundred years, as of yesterday. Such a story to tell, but I should anyway. Where to start is the problem, though. Maybe the days before I was born into darkness, as some call it.2
I glance around to make sure no one is reading this for they will think it is mysterious how I write three sentences in 2 seconds and still manage to write notes for the class I am currently taking.3
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Chapter 2-Past5
It was the week before my eighteenth, and how excited I was. I had been waiting for the year I became an adult since I was ten. 6
I was at a mall, by myself, a usual thing I did every day in my mortal life. I was reading a vampire book, totally engrossed in how interesting their lives were. How intriguing it was for me to wish I was one. I find it funny now. I had always found them interesting. They had so many adventures, so much they lived through. They had such a different way of life than what I had. I wanted to live like that. I wanted to be one of them. That's all I had wanted in life.7
As I read, someone caught my eye. He was tall, well, taller than myself. Dark brown eyes, slightly tanned but very pale at the same time. He wore black clothes and an awesome trench coat. [All black, my kind of person,] I thought grinning, as I returned my attention back to the book.8
"Reading indoors, on such a lovely day? What a shame," he said. I laughed, "And lose my pale whiteness to blind you with, no thank you." I looked up at him and saw his smile. [Very handsome,] I thought.9
[Not as beautiful as yourself, Queen.] His voice said, though I could have sworn his lips didn't move. My jaw dropped and he smiled again and sat next to me.10
"Who are you?" I finally managed to ask.11
"My name is Eric Raven," he said with a sudden accent, I couldn't quite place it. "And you are Amelia Shepard, are you not?"12
I slowly nodded in disbelief. [How does he know my name and _what_ is he?] was all I could think. Then he kissed my lips, smiled, and disappeared. For a split second, when he smiled at me, I swore I saw fangs. I went back to my book, paying attention more than before.13
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Chapter 3-Past15
All the next day, I could not stop smiling. I knew people thought of me as scary when I smiled, except my friend, Chelsea.16
In choir class, someone pushed me and I turned to see Chelsea and we started to laugh.17
"You punk," I said as I pushed Chelsea back, laughing still.18
"What's going on?" she asked, pulling me away from everyone, out of hearing range of anyone.19
I laughed a little and blushed. "I met a guy at the mall yesterday."20
"Ooh! Did you kiss him? Was he hot? Did you get his name and number?" She rambled off random questions and I put my hand up to cut her off so I could answer her.21
"His name is Eric Raven. He-"22
"Ooh, sounds like a vampire! Describe!!" 23
I smacked her arm, then said "Shut up and I'll tell you, dorkface!"24
She stared at me, waiting for me to go on, then she looked over my shoulder, slightly confused. I turned to see where she was looking, when there he was with the secretary that I worked for at the time.25
"Amelia, there you are! This is Eric, he has class with you, could you show him around?"26
I nodded slowly and he bowed his head slightly towards me [Queen,] his voice appeared in my head.27
"Well, you seem to know each other. Amelia, intro!" Chelsea's voice broke the silence.28
"Sorry, um Chelsea, this is Eric Raven." I gave her the "do-not-act-like-I-was-talking-about-him" look and she nodded. I turned back to him.29
"Um, what voice part are you?"30
"Tenor."31
"Well you're with me then. I grabbed my music and we sat down.32
He got the music for the class and sat down next to me. He seemed to know the songs perfectly, like he had learned them before, which was slightly impossible because they were written by our choir teacher. The bell rang and thankfully, he had a different class then myself, though he had the same lunch as Chelsea and myself. I showed him to his class, went to mine and sat down exasperatedly, trying my hardest to regain my thoughts and to think about who Eric really was... what he was, I wasn't sure.33
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that was like a movie playing in my head.
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Loved it
I love it. Emily you rock. I can't wait for parts 4-8. I love vampires too. -
made me think of some story i read awhile back but only in the sense of someone being in school and being trapped at a certain age but being immortal, i think it was stephen king but i can't be sure of that lol my memory is like a sieve for such things. anyway, i enjoyed this first part of your story, very well done. mmm you said lunch - raids the kitchen and comes back with a pickle covered in mustard
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I am in shock. I love it. I am off to read the rest of it. I am in awe. I think that I am going to use that intake on my next novel.
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Me reading the others now, I like this so far, so yay!
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this is amazing..altho it sounds like a book i just finished called vampire kisses. a little bit like two other books by the same author, called shattered galss and forest of darkness(or something like that). i cant wait to read the next chapters.
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hmmm suprised i didn't comment on this...i thought it was very good *nods to Eric Raven* "you famous now boy" hehe...very good story so far tomorrow i will read 4-6 or whatever the next segment is
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Well, I don't know what I truly feel, so I doubt I am part of the group you are speaking of.
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I love her dearly.. Her name on here.. Is "I love you eric" obviously.. I do not know what to say on it however... You could be one.. Depends on what you feel....
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And who is that? Please tell me, I'm curious... and am I one of the girls you speak of?
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By the way that some people view me.. Many people fall in love with me.. I know these girls.. And they fall in love with me.. And I only love one truly..
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By whom? I shall destroy them for it.
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Because I have been shot..
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why are you wounded love?
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*sighs* I.. *falls over wounded*
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The 4th through 7th chapters are out!
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lol...all the time man...all the time...when is the rest commin out?
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lol, I didn't know you were lookin!
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yyeesssssss...just what i have been looking for!!
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Yeah, I hope he does appreciate it... I somewhat doubt it for some reason though...
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You shouldn't thank me yet... I have yet to even start it on here. I will warn you... how I describe you, is how I visualized you... *shrugs* it's the best thing I could possibly think of...
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Quite Intresting
A nice tribute to Eric Raven. I hope he appreaciates the effort this write took. I must say Very Intresting. -
I.. Am.. Impressed...
What can I say here... I am a blank when it comes to reply to this.. You have great talent as a writer queen... If things could be the way they are in this story.. Life would be perfect... I am honored that I am in this, my queen. I know not of which to say in reply. Only that I am speechless and do not know what to say...
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