Illumination in Darkness: Chapter 1

"Damn it! Where is he?" 1

"Calm down, Duo. He'll be here, okay, so just chill." 2

"But we've been waiting here for the past fifteen minutes! He should've been here by now!" 3

"Maybe he got caught up; you know how he is." 4

"I am fully aware of that possibility, Trowa, but might I ask what on Earth could keep him from getting here on time!?" 5

"You'd be surprised." 6

"Thank you for that, Mr. Smartaleck!" 7

"I'm just saying." 8

"You really need to control your patience levels." 9

"Did I ask for your opinion, Dorothy?" 10

"Grrr! I've had enough of this!" 11

"OW!" 12

"If you don't start getting it together, Duo, I'm gonna have to make you!" 13

"Okay! Okay! Ow! I'll...cool down alright!?" 14

"Thank you." 15

"Sheesh! Man, did you really have to pull so hard, Hilde?" 16

"Well, how else was I supposed to get my concerns through your thick head, huh!?" 17

"Alright, alright. You've made your point." 18

"Hmph." 19

"But wouldn't you think that he would want to be here on time?" 20

"Mm...maybe, but you never really know with that guy." 21

"But he knows how important this is to her. She is turning 18 after all." 22

"Yeah...but like Trowa said, you just never know." 23

~ * * * * * ~ 24

The sun was soon to set and that meant only one thing: the party was about to begin! Usually, this would be the height of excitement for everyone, including the staff, but the one thing that was on Carolyn's mind was anything but excitement. The guests are seated; the food is ready to serve; the music ready to play; but the most crucial element was missing! The guest of honor was nowhere to be seen! Carolyn, herself, directed her to her quarters to prep up, but she no longer rests there! Where could she be!? 25

The air was filled with a kalydescope of fresh aromas: the suculant food prepped and waiting to be served; the floral escences from the scented candles littered about the ballroom; and the occasional whiff of overly expensive perfume from the overly wealthy guests gathered. Not one of the soothing fragrances calmed Carolyn's nerves even in the least. 26

Nearly five minutes before she is supposed to make her appearance. Where on this Earth could she be!? It doesn't make any sense! Why would she be late to her own birthday party that she planned!? 27

"Dah! I can't take this anymore! Doesn't she understand the utmost importance of punctuality!? Why must she do this to me!?" 28

Unfortunately, Carolyn wasn't exactly discreet about this little outburst. All of the guests stared at her, puzzled as to why she interupted their conversations with such a loud gesture. Carolyn found herself in a very awkward position. She decided to just regain her compusre and continue on with her duties. 29

Author notes

Okay, here's Chapter 1, and, agian, no title other than Chapter 1. Now, the nothing but dialogue at the top is intentional. One, because I didn't know how to start, and two, because I wasn't really sure about how the surroundings were gonna be so don't complain. I'll come back and give a good enough descritption on the actual ballroom later on in the story (not too much later I promise ;) ). As I said in my prologue, I am really enjoying writing this stroy and I hope you are enjoying reading it. Whether you're a GW fan or not I'll accomodate for everyone in the next couple chapters, okay? Don't turn away just because you don't know the series because this story wont have much to do with the original story line anyway. Well, better get the next chapter up! It's the longer one as of now. Wish me luck that I stay awake long enough to do it! Thanks for reading!

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  • Arovell
    May 20, 2006
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    Still strong

    Another surprise in this one. You put a T in the word "really."

    overall: 8.