Though i lay here in a pool of my own blood I lay back and remember the happiness that filled my life. 1
I've met friends that are true, ones that would hang on even in the face of certain death. I've seen pools and fountains of blood, I've seen beautiful meddows full of wildflowers. 2
I have seen the devil and shown him I'm better than him. I have slapped god in the face for thinking he is true. 3
I have sen great walls fall and watched religious conflicts be started. I watched the towers fall and I was there at the Japanese bombing raid. 4
My soul was projected through astral magic through the ages, I have seen arthur ( he was a cool guy) I have seen ghengis kahn in his full glory. 5
I have fallen in love with many. But still all i think about is one. But she is so distant its pointless. 6
I have watched houses burn to the ground and all the memories of wise old men be washed away by torential waters. 7
I have seen the massive funnel destroy homes, and with it i have seen little girls cry. 8
I have watched my mother cry over her fathers casket, I have seen my grandmother from healthy radiant youth, to destructive cancers and falls. 9
I have watched gangs make huge triumphs and failures i have seen the collapse of regimes. I love this world, in all its turbulent glory. 10
Now i lay here crying in a pool of my own blood waiting for the reaper to take me away, I love this place, i love these people. 11
I love this lifetime, correction ... LOVED12
Mason 13
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Well that was an interesting spurt of a happidom
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WOW!!..This is awesome Mason..I really like it..It is very deep and very true..I Love Ya Man..Never ever fucking change, cause you know Ill kick your ass if you do...! I Love Ya!
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this is the best thing i've read all day. it's a good one. the ending is amazing. -
Chilling!
Awesome job, Bro. The only nit picks I have are the lack of capitolizations where they are needed. Arthur and Ghengis Kahn need to be capitolized. You also missed quite a few "I"s as well. I know thier pain all too well. I have seen a great many things, done a great many things I am both proud of and ashamed of, and I too, mourn for the loss of a woman I both can never have again, nor do I want in my life again. This is as bleak as it is beautiful, and as sad as it is happy. Except for the above mentioned, problems, and the typo of "seen" in line 4, this was very well done.
Bo



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