Black inn of hell!

I saw hell in this inn and where I do go from here.
Even hell's fire can't harm me now.said Rj.If understand why you are beging to test for your fears
you wouldn't have to asked.said Kim.Okay!said Rj.The black inn was built for the dead by an wiccan named Sam cole.said Dr.Miller.You tell this
hotel is haunted !said Connor.There two man named sam.said Duncan.Yeppie!said Alice.Think there than
ghost haunted going in here.said Rj.You don't belive in ghost?asked Dr.Hungas.No!said Rj.Five rooms in this inn.said Jack.Why is there a spear
room in this inn?asked Kim.I don't know!said Dr.Miller. Kill me now!said Sam crane.No!yelled Rj
Stop stop!said Kim.It's a trap!said Emilia.Sam cole is sam crane.said Sgt Evans .A flase name.said Kim.
Yes.said Dr.Dovite.To kill with props !said Duncan.
it's a book,Enstine.said Rj.werid title for a book.said Duncan.Did see the news last night Too late .said Kim.He is reporter for paris daily.said
Amrilia Adams.See him now!said Rj.You said his name is Sam crane.said Jack.See this news paper head line.said Kim.Ho my god,He is alive!said Emilia.stop
This madness now!said Connor.Where is Rj?asked Methos.She was right here.said Kim.Ho god,She gone after sam crane to kill him.said Dr.Miller.She was prey now she is hunter.said Dr.Hungas.Sam you die!
said Rj.Later !said Sam.You tell kim,Jack.said Rj.
I have to tell her now.said Jack.Well,I thought you were my friend.said Rj.Ho I'm sorry!said Jack.There
time would to have very vaction in Egland.said Rj1

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She tells about her murder tried to killed her!

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  • lil-ole-me
    May 9, 2006
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    this needs to be re-written

    it's a mess. i would have to go line by line to point out all the errors, so instead i will just say - rewrite it.