A Vampire will do what he will do........The finding of a mortal[4]

you are draged down the stairs you wimper and say only just audible"it hurts"
"Bloody shut up" spike says "Spike if you let me be first why did you decide to take me the second time?"you ask
"even with no soul i am a pretty decent vampire"he said
Nikki's pov
he is soo hot
spike laughed
"what?"you ask
"im hot eh?"
he said
omi god gotta stop thinking
Spike kept laughing.
finally he said
:"i think your hot too"
he pulled you up and you kissed a deep passionet kiss you lips opened tounges met
Rikku walks in holding a glass of blood
she drops it
"bloddy hell Spike with a Mortal! you pervert"she screamed
"Im 127 stop sis!"he said droping you
"ow....."you say rubbing the back of your head.
Spike cleans up the blood.
"So spike you can read my thoughts?"you ask
"yeah"he says
"what am i thinking now?"you ask
chicken you think
"chicken...a bloody odd thought i'd say." 1

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