A Vampire will do what he will do........The finding of a mortal[2]

you wake up and try to walk you cant
"wat the-"you start you look up ....chains.
you see four faces peering p at you.
you hear arguing and then
"shush she's waking up...."
WAT THE HELL WHERE AM I....
you neck tingles....it hurts.....it burns....you pass out.
you wake up finding yourself on a bed with soft satin sheets.
you sit up quite startled.you see three really hot guys and 1 girl.
one glares at you like theere is no tomarrow.One is trying to look up your skirt(nikkiervert) and the other guy is leaning you reconize him.....but the girl jumps over to you.like she had never seen a human...but she was one....wasnt she?
you put your hand up to your neck you feel......2,4,6,8,10,....12 pair of holes in your neck.
"thoes may sting a bit hehe" she says.you felt really weak."where...where am i?"you ask kinda nervously....."you are in our CRYPT
you fall out of bed and try to get up from the floor.
The one that you had met before lifted you and put you into the bed.
"who are you"asked the girl quite entriged(sp?)
"I i'm Nikki Vamprikarma....who-who are you??...."
The girl answered first"Im Rikku"
The perverted vamp said"Im not perverted and my name is angel you have marks on your legs....."
you look down....you have marks and symbols on your legs from a knife.
The second guy just sayed(glaring like there is no tomorrow)"Trevor"
and the one who put you here? he said ..."Spike" he had such dreamy eyes. 1

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  • Rebel Rebel silver member
    May 16, 2006
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    Removed Background.

    So that I could read it better. I see that you have a passion for the dark side. I will light a candle and try to fathom it. Your passion in times past have led you to run into a hottie or two. Smile.

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, overall: 5, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.