The Jade curse of Sara crane

I will lived to see another day and I will see my
friends again.said Sgt Evans.There is curse jade with thesse written in the necklace pent.said Dr.Dovite.See me now and Two hrs there will a curse in this house.said Kim.A curse!said Emilia .The book
of death was written in old english.said Dr.Miller
Thee spell thou is cast and will thy worked by hand.
said Sg Evans.William saras wrote the book of death in 1450 in England.said Connor.See them run and see them play.said Dr.Hungas.A song !said Duncan.Love and war.said Kim.Novel.said Amrila Adams.Joke is on
you.said Dana.Three is a number use for this curse.
Said Sgt Evans.Two and fours hrs was a code for this curse of the jade.said Jack.Kill her now !yell
Alice.She is poltergise.said Kim.She is a witch before she was a poltergise.said Rj.She was killed in this room.said Alice.Blood was found and Three axes in the room near this ballroom.said Rj.They look up and sara holding and run upstairs .They saw her standind and smiling over a the ballroom celling .Run,Run!said Connor.The necklace is missing .said Rj.She after her killer Sam crane Jr.said Alice.What do think you?asked Rj.See her in this room.said Jack.Look behind you,Rj!yell Jack.
We ran outside the house and the curse had ended when she killed sam crane.said Rj 1

Author notes

They went inside of crane house's ball room.

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  • lil-ole-me
    May 9, 2006
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    you already know what i think

    rewrite it.

    overall: 1.