What's your choice?

When you can't go living on,1

And your life seems all wrong.2

The only thing you can do is end your life.3

So end your life and don't care,4

About your friends and family who do care.5

You think you can't be loved,6

When you are.7

God, Jesus, family and friends,8

They love you and they care.9

So they will say "don't do it."10

So what will you do?11

Live or choose to die?12

Author notes

This is a very personal poem, I wrote this today while I was at school. I was really depressed when I wrote this poem. And my choice is live.

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  • silentlystill
    February 19, 2004
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    That... just... oh wow. I can totally relate. When things just go totally bad and you want to just let it end as soon as you can... but there are people who love you and do actually care for you. So there's that decision. Luckily I chose to not kill myself, but the thought lurks around in my head sometimes. It's so hard at times when it feels like there is nothing left for you in the world. It really is.

    This poem is just fantastic. Glad your choice is to live too.