Baby, Baby

Ashlyn's eyes widened as she saw the tickets and felt his kiss and she couldn't believe that he still wanted to be with her even through all of this and that he'd remembered their anniversary. She shook her head and busted into giggles even though she still had tears in her eyes and she nodded. "Happy Anniversary to you too." She said through tears as she threw her arms around him and hugged him tightly as she thanked God that she still had her husband and his love and forgiveness. 1

She slowly pulled away from him however and sighed quietly. "I have an anniversary present for you too." She whispered as she took his hands in hers and put them on her stomach as she looked up at him. "I can't umm...I can't drink on the cruise." She said softly, a small smile on her face. 2

"Cause I'm pregnant...I was before all of this started and was just waiting for the perfect time to tell you. I'm having your baby." She said softly, the news being his gift.
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Well well well, I guess happiness does reign supreme after all :)

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  • April 20, 2006
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    GREAT!!

    GREAT!!! WOAH WAT A TWISTED SURPRISE!!!!!!!!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 10, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Moonlightwolf87
    April 20, 2006

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    well well well what a tale this was. I'm happy it ended well though. Wonderful job and it was fun writing with you. We will have to do this again sometime.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 10, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.