The sea !

I saw evil sea witch trying to killed me .said Kim.
There no sea witch!said Emilia .Killed the witch!said Rj.You there!said Jack.Sea sick!said Connor.Yes!said Jack.She lives in the sea !said Mr
Jones.There no myth of the sea!said Dr.Miller.Yes!said Harry.The message in bottle !said Sara.Read it!
said Rj.Dear,Tammy
I missed and I love you too.I'll be back soon and
I saw the sea the witch.She wants to killed you .
Are you a mermaid? If you are and tell the truth.
Love,Eric.Help me!said Lilly.A fish!said Jack.No!
Said Connor.We didn't catch any fish today!said Rj.
Throw her back in the sea!said Kim.They saw the sea witch trying to killed lilly and so they watched it happen to her.They stay at sea for six days and seven nights.untill they reached the shore of lillian island.Where are we?asked Kim.There's cocnuts on the island!said Jack.My dress is ruined .said Kim.Wear pants next time!said Connor.We miss the tide!said Dr.Miller.No lights , water !said Emilia.You want to go back there !said Duncan.We are ready to make camp here!said Rj.Fire wood !said Connor.She is here !said Rj.Run!yell Jack.No flares!said Rj.you packed the things yourslef.said Kim.We will be staying for long time.said Jack.No!said Dr.Miller.We left the island and headed east for RoseIsland .said Rj.Good day !said Rj.You have any thing to trade for the ship.said Lilly.No!said Rj.We left again.said Rj.The
Tale of the sea witch has with and them leaving the
island.Rj
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