Dear James,
The apartment was still on fire when your girlfriend kissed me. I had been almost to the door, coughing the fumes of the sufficateing smoke in my lungs. I was regaining hope of living, when i heard an ear-piercing scream. In my haste, i turned around to see the floor ten feet away colapsing into a big deep firey pit. The scream had come from the girl hanging on to the tip for her dear life, and my haert skipped about a thousand beats: It was Amy Patricca.
~flashback~
"I never saw this coming." I thought angrily. The memory of James and Amy kissing was still scared in to his mind, the way he held her, the way she held him. Like no other way you could imagine somone doing so, there was passion, and love and the heat.
It was an act of betrayl, as he saw it. "That son of bitch!" (sorry for the language)he screamed to himself, wacking a shelf full of books off with his arm as he passed around the living room of the English Arts Scool of Boarding. (a boarding school) After all his years of love and respect for Amy, ever since the moment he layed eyes on her knwing she was the most beatiful creature he had ever seen, james had to go off and do someting like this.
~flashback over~
I jumped over towards Amy faster then i hade inteded to almost knocking the both of us into the pit. I managed to gain back my blance and found myself being all that was holding Amy up.
With all my strength i managed hoist Amy up and the next 5 seconds were a blur.
I found myself shielding amy as the flames grew , jumping out a second before the building blew up into flames. I helped amy up to her feet and our eyes met. Her eyes were most beatiful as they were a dark silky shaded of hazel, and the time caught up with me as our lips met, for the first time.
Once she had pulled away, i kissed her lips softly, back.
I love Amy Patterica with all my heart and soul and mind and if i have to wait an eternity for her, then so be it. Ther is nothing u can do to change my mind.1
Once a dear friend, now, lost.
Tyler Acivo2
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Author notes
I hope u like my story, and wheater i win the contest or not, i'm very proud of myself, for i wrote this story just as it went, with no intinual plans (yay me!)
A contest entry
- Unbareable Depression by tearsofsadness.
1350 points, ended June 21, 2006, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What do u think? (lol)
Comments
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WOW
You made an excellent story... the emotions portrayed by your character... was.... depressingly amazing! the plot was nice, and the way you describe the actions was also outstanding...
great job!



