The path finder !

I went to hell and back !said Rj
Wait !said Kim
Who are you? asked Sara
She is dead ! said Kim
There are some path to see and look over your sholuder!said Duncan
There an old car !said Emilia
The path finder was written by Tom moore.said Rj
Kill her !yell Connor
No!yell Rj
Run,Run!said Jack
Here is a letter !said Dr.Miller
See !said Sara
No!yell Rj
Dear,Rj
I'm back and I want to kill you .There is help here and you will died.Five days in hell and where I
did go.So what !Are you not my friend and If you tell a lie you will died .Too late for second chance .I'm sara crane and I'm death hear me scream in pain.Stop the pathfinder in the ball room.It's evil.another thing is you are too smart for you're good.Your loving friend,
sara crane. 1

Author notes

The pathfinder is old monster who lives in the ball room.The end of the story letter tells her to find the creature and kill it!

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