He sat at the edge of the lake in his favorite fishing chair and looked out on the water as the sun shone down making it sparkle like the most expensive diamond never could. An unseen wind had the water raising in tiny ripples that never ceased over the glassy surface of the water. A stake in the ground held his fishing pole, the line already cast and simply waiting patiently for a curious bite from an unsuspecting fish. He looked beyond the water and saw tiny specks of color dotting the edge of the lake, it was a popular fishing hole, but this spot was his. He had found it years ago and only he knew the complicated trail leading to it, well he and his buddies anyway. They hadn’t blabbed it to anyone in ten years, so he had no reason to believe they would start talking now. 1
He shifted in his seat and opened his mouth and let out a loud burp and crushed a beer can in his hand before tossing it into the garbage can he and his friends had dragged down here the second year they had used this spot. Today, was Saturday, he had asked the guys if they wanted to join him, but they had all had business to take care of this weekend, so it was just him. He had taken Friday off and left his wife at home to take care of the kids while he enjoyed the very first weekend of fishing season. There was still a faint bite of spring in the air at night, but during the day, summer boiled the soul. 2
He flicked open another beer and took a big gulp and began to feel the tug of sleep. He set the can in its holder and checked his line before settling back in his chair. The soft rippling of the water began to lull him and the soft song of a bird singing in the distance was so sweet. The soft rustling of the brush finally relaxed him and his eyes slid shut and he fell softly to sleep, nature’s song shaping his dreams. 3
The click of a reel being turned jerked him from his slumber and he started to grab his pole and saw that it was still slack and the pole tip unbent. Confusion set in and he looked around for the source of the sound and saw her. Standing at the water’s edge was a strange woman reeling in her line. Instantly, anger flashed in his mind at the guy’s betrayal of their spot. His eyes fell to the ground and he took a deep breath to regain his control. 4
His eyes crept to her boots, they were low cut, thick soled, brown monstrosities. His gaze slipped up slowly, he smiled a little at the cute lacey socks that hugged her ankles. Her legs were something out of playboy, so silky smooth and the skin was perfectly formed, not a scar or even the hint of cellulite. He shook of the sudden image of those legs wrapped around his waste and made his next mistake. He lifted his gaze to her ass and stopped breathing completely as he looked upon perfection tucked into a tight pair of cut-off jeans that barely covered her cheeks. He slid his hand to his crotch and adjusted himself as he stared. 5
She finished reeling in her line and turned to face him and he watched her kneel down to her tackle box. He allowed himself the pleasure of stealing a glance at her chest. It was hard to see with her hunched over the box searching for something, but her shirt clung to her body like a second skin and when she sat back on her heels she was fully exposed to him. The white baby doll shirt lifted a little and his gaze fell to the tiny shimmering metal at her belly button. He licked his lips as he imagined himself circling her navel and finally taking it in his mouth sensually. The creamy flesh of her belly told him the rest of her body would be the same. He lifted his gaze back to the curve of her breasts and felt himself growing with appreciation against the confines of his pants. He could barely make out the slight indentation of a nipple through the tight fabric of her shirt. His mouth began to water as he though of how wondrous the hard nub would taste as he flicked his tongue over it. 6
“I’m Abby.” 7
He flinched as if he’d been slapped and cleared his throat, “I’m Gary.” 8
She smiled over at him, “Does your wife approve of you ogling women like that Gary?” 9
He realized his hand was still cupping his crotch and removed it with a jolt, “How do you know I’m married?” Still sure one of his buddies had betrayed the privacy of this spot. 10
She giggled, “You’re holding onto the arm of that chair so tightly, its hard not to notice the band of gold on your ring finger.” 11
He peeled his hand from the arm and flexed his hand gingerly, “I wasn’t ogling.” he grumbled. 12
She chose to let it go and turned her attention back to the tackle box. He smiled as she tucked a piece of hair behind her ear, only to have it fall right back in her face. He found her hair to be most alluring, her strawberry blonde curls flared out around her face, but a slight breeze kept blowing it in her face. His hand itched for him to kneel before her and pull her face to his and smooth her hair from her face before placing a soft kiss on her full lips. 13
“Can you help me?” 14
He blinked, thinking for a moment, she was asking him to help her get her hair out of her face. “What?” 15
“I can’t figure out which lure to use.” 16
He pushed his lurid thoughts aside and leaned forward to get a better look into her tackle box. “That one would work best here.” He pointed to a bright purple rubber worm, which sparkled in the sun as she lifted it from the box. 17
“Thanks.” 18
He sat back and watched as she expertly attached the lure to her line and placed several mini marshmallows on the hook. He admired the curves of her body once more as she cast her line. 19
“I have an extra stake if you don’t want to stand there holding the pole for hours.” 20
“No thanks.” 21
He sat there admiring her legs as she stood there reeling the line slowly. He lost track of everything except the soft curve of her legs meshing into her perfectly round ass and disappearing beneath her tight cut-off shorts. A small breeze curled the frayed strings up and they feathered back down gently. He imagined her soft giggle as he traced his tongue over the edge of the shorts, tickling her with the light touch of his tongue. 22
“When you’re done staring, would you care to help me reel this thing in? How big ARE the fish in this lake?” 23
He blinked and snapped back to reality and the noise of the reel being pulled filled his ears. He quickly got up and hesitated as he stepped behind her and slid his arms around her. He inhaled and caught the scent of vanilla as he circled her body and placed his hands over hers. He knew he didn’t have to be this close to help her, but who knew when he’d have another chance like this? 24
Regrettably he turned his attention to the fishing pole and concentrated on reeling the fish to shore. It took about ten minutes before they caught sight of the massive creature, but finally he was close enough to lift out of the water. His body cried out it disapproval as he stepped away from her and grabbed the fishnet. She finished turning the reel and the fish flopped out of the water, fighting to get free. The metal frame of the net circled around it and suddenly the fish was tangled within the net. 25
“Do you have a cooler to put this in?” 26
She shook her head and he pointed to his cooler and she ran to it and opened it for him. The fish splashed into the icy water, but no longer moved. Carefully removing the hook from its mouth he let the fish flop back into the water and stood up with a smile letting the lid fall shut to prevent any jumping fish trying for the great escape. 27
She rubbed her hands together and winced, “I’ve never caught a fish that big before.” 28
“It’s got to be a over a foot long and two inches thick! You should be proud of that thing, I’ve never caught one that big!” 29
She extended her hand, “Thanks for the help, I think I’m going to head home. It was nice to meet you Gary.” 30
He smiled, “I have an extra hook if you want to use it to carry it home.” 31
“You keep it.” 32
He took her slender hand in his and looked down at it. Without thinking he rubbed his finger over the palm of her hand. He frowned when she winced in pain and tried to pull her hand back. He held it firmly and looked at her, “You should have been wearing gloves.” 33
“It doesn’t hurt that much, really.” 34
“Bullshit!” He yanked her to the water’s edge and dipped her hands into the cool water. 35
She tried to pull her hands free but he tugged them back a little too hard and she fell against him and they tumbled into the water. They came up gasping for air and made their way back up the steep sloping shore and climbed out of the water. 36
“You did that on purpose!” 37
“I swear I didn’t, if you had just let me try and help you, we wouldn’t have fallen in!” 38
Her teeth began to chatter as she shivered from being wet. His gaze raked over her body and stopped on her chest. Her dark nipples were hard as rocks against the white fabric of her shirt. He took a step towards her, meaning to bend to finally taste them, when she stepped back and hugged herself. 39
“Do you by any chance have a change of clothes or something? I’m freezing.” 40
He nodded and led her a few yards away to his little camp site. He had a little tent set up a few feet away from the fire pit he himself had dug years ago. He gave her his pajamas and a towel and she disappeared inside the tent. A cool breeze sent a shiver down his spine and he quickly grabbed a few logs from his things and built a fire. He went back to his fishing spot and grabbed the cooler and carried it back to the camp. She was out of the tent and he stopped and just stared at her wearing his pajamas. He wore them just to sleep in and never realized just how sexy they could look stretched across a person’s body. 41
For the first time in his life, he envied his pajama’s. He set the cooler down and stood to watch as she hung the last of her wet clothes on a tree branch nearby. She turned and smiled at him and he frowned and turned away to grab a towel and a pair of sweatpants he kept for times when he didn’t feel like wearing pajamas. He peeled his wet clothes off and rubbed the towel over his ice cold body. He closed his eyes and wanted so bad to warm himself by plunging deep into Abby’s flesh. He grew hard as a rock and groaned as he pulled the pants over his waist. 42
“bring out your clothes and I’ll hang them up for you. Dinner will be ready soon too, so hurry up!” 43
He unzipped the tent flap and peered out to see that she had dug through his things for a pan and had already cleaned two fish and cut up one of his sticks of butter. He took a whiff and his mouth watered. He grabbed his clothes and handed them to her. He looked at his supplies and said, “I see you made yourself at home with my stuff.” 44
“Oh sorry, but I figured you wouldn’t mind.” 45
She climbed from the tree and lifted the pan from the fire and grabbed two plates and handed one to him. They ate in silence and he wondered how they were going to sleep. She yawned after finishing the meal and headed to the tent. He sat by the fire just staring at the flames licking the sky. When he was pretty sure she would be asleep he crept inside the tent and crawled in next to her. The tent was barely big enough for two people and try as he might, he couldn’t lay there without touching her. He turned away from her and tried to sleep, but couldn’t seem to make his eyes shut long enough to stop thinking about her being so close. Rolling over finally, he listened to the sound of her breathing. Suddenly, she rolled over and opened her eyes and looked at him. 46
“Can’t sleep?” 47
He held his breath and tried to think of something clever to say, “Nope.” 48
She smiled and said nothing, he watched as her tongue slid between her lips leaving a wet trail in its wake. Something in him snapped and a groan tore from him and he rolled on top of her in an instant and crushed his lips against hers. Nothing he could have ever imagined would have done justice to the soft feel of her enticingly full lips on his. He traced his tongue over her top lip and enjoyed the sigh that tickled his face before he took her bottom lip between his teeth and tugged playfully. Lifting her head to his she covered his mouth with hers and slid her tongue deep into his mouth. He rubbed his tongue over hers and savored the taste of her, his hands cupped her head, mirroring hers and their hands curled through each other’s hair as they kissed. His fingers slide through her still soft hair and he tugged it gently lifting her chin enough for him to dip his lips to her neck. He feathered tiny kisses along her collarbone before sliding his tongue along the graceful curve of her neck. 49
The sweet sound of her moans vibrating against his mouth was almost his undoing. Taking a deep breath to control his raging hormones, he trailed kisses to the center of her chest, dipping his tongue barely beneath the edge of the pajamas. He took a the snap into his mouth and tugged, opening it just a little more. Before moving to the next snap, he dipped his tongue to her creamy skin and feasted on its milky softness. He did this with each snap until the top slid open enough for him to capture a rock hard nipple in his mouth. Her moans were music to his ears as he flicked his tongue over the sensitive nubs. 50
Suddenly he yanked the shirt open and began licking his way down to her navel. Her legs locked around him as he dipped his tongue into the enticing flesh. The sweet twang of metal filled his mouth as her belly button ring scraped across his tongue. He vaguely registered her moans of pleasure as he rubbed his tongue over it. He took it between his teeth and tugged gently before letting it go. He dipped his tongue further down and came to the elastic waistband of the pajama bottoms. He sat up and unwrapped her legs from him and smiled as she lifted her hips so his could slide them off. 51
He did just that and tossed them aside as he knelt between her legs. He ran his fingers over her feet slowly and dipped his mouth to kiss the bottom of first one then the other. He watched in amazement as she sat up, displaying how limber she was, while he held her foot in his hands. He watched helpless as she tugged down his sweatpants and took him in her hands eagerly. Her mouth slid over him completely and he had to shut his eyes or he knew he would lose it right then. As she slid her mouth over his eager member, he turned his attention back to her legs. He placed sweet kisses on her ankles and kissed his way to her knees, moaning softly every few seconds as her mouth worked him over. 52
Unable to stand it any longer, he pushed her onto her back and smiled down at her as he licked his lips. He slid his hands beneath her bottom and cupped it gently before lifting her hips into the air. He rested her on his chest easily and wrapped her legs around his neck and dipped his face into her pussy. He enjoyed her cry of delight as he dipped his tongue into her sweet pussy. He sucked down her sweet juices and flicked his tongue over her engorged clit. His tongue stroked circles around the soft button and she moaned softly at first. Her moans came quicker and more frantic as he continued to work his tongue on her. He knew she was almost over the edge, so he took his thumb and slipped it barely into her soaking wet pussy and shook it frantically as he quickened the movements of his tongue. When she tightened her legs around his neck he knew she was there, and he sucked it into his mouth completely and flicked his tongue rapidly over the top. She threw her head back and screamed with the pleasure of it. Over and over, she screamed her delight as he sent her over the edge. 53
Finally, he slid her down his body and she felt his hard cock sliding over her ass and hesitate at the entrance. She looked up into his searching eyes and smiled and pulled him into her slowly. He needed no more encouragement from her and began to move within her instantly. It was his turn to moan with pleasure as he plunged as deep as he could go only to slid out and right back. The world swirled out of focus as their hips ground together. The world exploded in a thousands specks of light as they both cried out in unison. He slammed into her one last time and her body welcomed him once more as they floated through a technicolor dream together. His lips crushed over a nipple and bit down as she raked her nails over his back frantically. 54
When they came to their senses sometime later, he lay awake cradling her in his arms. Thoughts of his family and beautiful wife at home waiting for him filled his mind. When Abby rolled over and out of his arms he decided to get up and fish to clear his head. He pulled on his sweatpants and stepped from the tent into the chilly early morning air. The dew had already settled on the ground and he quickly dressed in the days clothes and headed to his spot. He cast his line a few minutes later and set it back into the pole stake and went to the water’s edge and pulled in a string until a big plastic bag surfaced and he pulled a beer from it before letting fall back into the water with a splash. 55
He cracked it open and took a big gulp and sat down in his chair. He set the can into the holder and leaned back, watching the sun slowly creep up into the sky. His eyes began to slide slowly shut as the midnight blue water turned back into the glittering diamond of the day. Gary jerked awake several hours later and looked around, there was no sign that anyone had been there. He searched everything and found no sign of her anywhere. After searching for an hour, he gave up and began packing everything up and toting it back to his truck. He had almost decided he must have dreamt it all when he opened the cooler and there it was, the huge fish he had helped her catch. He smiled and closed the lid before carrying it back to the truck and climbing in. 56
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Author notes
I'm not sure I like how it ended, but I had planned to have them make love sooner and not have it be an overnight thing...it messed with my overall plan when I did that so, my idea of it all being a dream sort of got confuzzled...hope you enjoyed it anyway, I am VERY happy with the beginning and middle!
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing. The descriptions, the imagery everything was spot on. Very sensual and sexy. Your ending was good but not as strong as the begining and middle, but its not something major. Really really good write. well done
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It certainly hit's the spot, Very well written
I fully enjoyed every wordbeginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I think that your sex stories are really sexy and they have a way of putting the reader into that position... I like dark rough or even unconsentual sex which is strange but its my fantasy.
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well then why not send me one
Thanks I certainly like the sound of your email. I am an ex-para trooper from england.I love and adore the same kinds.I would love to act out the rape seen both ways just for that experence and more than one attacker.I am very new to this and would like help getting to know more guys like are selfs, Could make for interesting writtings.xgod bless and be cool guyx
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Actually the idea of it being a dream works out fine. I actually really loved this piece. I loved how you set the scene up and how descriptive the story was. The setting is amazing I can actually picture. You did a great job of setting up the characters too. Good write.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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The story was awsome. The ending was a little wierd but good none the less. But i liked it alot. It did take a while. At first i dindt think she would allow him to have sex with her. But clearly she did huh. It was very good.
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You painted a wonderful picture!
Overall, the story was great. It had a ver nice feel to it. There were a few little nitpicks that I had, though. The first one was in paragraph 53
****He rested her on his chest easily and wrapped her legs around his neck and dipped his face into her pussy. He enjoyed her cry of delight as he dipped his tongue into her sweet pussy(I would change the second pussy to something else, like "dipped his tongue into her sweet/molton/dripping slit." ***** There were also a few instances where a comma should have been placed.
The only other problem I had was the size of the "monster" fish. Depending on what species it was, 12" for a fish isn't that big, and neither is 2" thick. I would state the type of fish it was, as well as make it larger and heavier. (Think 5lb bass). Other than that, a very enjoyable (except for the cheating part) read. It would maybe have been a little nicer, if the woman happened to be his wife, and she managed to get someone to watch the kids, while she tracked him down for a little weekend get away.
Thank you for the great read,
Bobeginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, overall: 6, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 4.
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I like how you brought the story to life by your words... I could really feel the characters's emotions, and feelings... the passion that you immbedded in the story was outstanding!!!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Quite good except that it was a dream
The build up of passion is exquisite.You could have added some description from her point of view also as she saw his body.beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, overall: 7, ending: 2, dialog: 3, characters: 4.
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loved it
it think its just fine. i love all the details you gave of her, her legs, hair, etc. and it did seem like a dream.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This is awsome, thefirst erotic peice i have read that isnt crude and pornagraphic, very impressed, it has a great plot and is all just sex sex sex, thanks again
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, overall: 9, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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You're good!
I don't know much about fishing, but hte distinction between a fishing "hole" and this "spot" was confuisng to me in the beginning.
Great intro and middle, though 'second skin' and 'fullly revealed' were a bit much in the middle of the body scan
'sweet' was used too many times.
Excellent sex scene and I really enjoyed the ending as well - it fit perfectly. You're good!beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 2, overall: 10, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 3.
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I liked it
Oh this was a hot number. I like the whole idea of fishing and making out in the woods. Now i am thinkin about goin campin.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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some dream
very enjoyable and very hot and sexy after reading that think i go do some fishing of my own hehehe fishing always sounded boring but after this am not so sure lol any one wanna come fishing with me smilessssssssoverall: 7.
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Well it was a bit long but full of details, i was almost lost but caught on quickly. It was hot... the ending was nice though... makes u wonder if she was there or not. though cheating to me is not the best idea but it felt really naughty. I like the title... had so many interpertations in my mind. though i came across a couple of typos
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, overall: 7, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 3.
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