Spring Break...part 5

"Then what's the problem? You've been acting weird all year and right through the semester. I dont know whatto do around you anymore."1

"I'm still me. You kissed me and I didnt know if it was a mistake or if you wanted to and I didnt want to stick around to find out. I figured if I stop spending so much time with you then I could forget what happen but I can't. I never could."2

"All you had to do was ask me."3

"That's easier said than done. I didnt want to be rejected and all I wanted was my life to go back the way it was. I wanted us to be normal again. How can you pretend like nothing happen?"4

"I already told you I'm sorry, what else do you want me to do? You can't say I'm pretending like it never happen because you haven't been around to know what I think or feel." At this point they were both yelling at each other. Neither one wanted to say how they feel because they both fear rejection. It was going the way she wanted it to so she added,5

"I didn't come here so we can fight and argue about what happen. I came to find out why you kissed me and why you're jelous."6

"What do you want me to say, that I like you because you already know that."7

"No, I didnt know and yes that's exactly what I wanted you to say."8

"Is that all? I have some where to be."9

"No, that's not all." She leaned in and kiss him and at first he didnt know how to respond but then his emotions were to strong and all he could do was fight not to stop kissing her.10

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  • sunny day
    August 9, 2007

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    Sue, If he fights to stop kissing her then he is a fool. I don't know how I missed this part. I don't see part 4 there either. I remember you had a problem with it. I wish they hadn't separated the two sites. I would prefer the poetry site to this. It has more to it with pictures and backgrounds. LOL I hope you are doing well and are you married now? OMG, it has been so long since we talked. I miss your writing. I do still look to see if you have anything new and I just re-read the last two entries you had here. Keep them coming please. Don't you stop your writing, you are fabulous. Love always, Joyce

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.