It was a cool summer night both my parents were at work and i was upstairs hanging out with my friendsw brittany and taylor and of course we were talking about zack the cutist boy in the school when brittany said we should call him so we did and invited him over well about thirty minuts later him and three of his friends came over i didnt say any thing cause i was just thinking they would come over watch a movie and leave well they had other plans during the move brittany and one of zacks friend started making out (i exspected that cause brittany and taylor both are sexually active and will go for any one)well after a while taylor was making out with the other boy. well the end of the movie talor and brittany had alretty left the room (i new what they were doing)me and zack started to talk and he started kissing and grabbing me i was going to say some thing but i didnt want to sound like a baby a few minuts latter he started to undress me this time i was trying to stop him but he pinned me on the couch and wouldent get off me i started to scream but noboby camehe kept kissing me to shut me up i kept trying to move but i coudent and then i tarted hereng brittany and taylor screaming(upstaris the same thing was happening to them)after about a few minutes he got of and yelled to his friend to come on after they left i got dressed and went up staries with my friends and cried while we made sure each other was okay finally when we calmed down enough to call are parents that night none of us sleptwe were to scared every time i closed my eyes i could see him on top of me smiling like he hade just robbed a bank now that picture is stuck in my head im sorry i couldent give you more detail i really dont like talking about it and im sure ill erase this storie soon 1
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because this is true - i can't critique it
i am sorry you and your friends went through that. you might not want to get rid of it. fix it up. clean up the typos - put in breaks or paragraphs. and save it - for a day when you yourself have children, and they talk about boys or girls for the first time. you will have something true to show them. something that may make them think twice before making the same mistakes you and your friends made. IT'S NOT YOUR FAULT. But you shouldn't trust any boys when your parents aren't home.overall: 7.
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