[ "You ready?" Kerryan asked. ]

"You ready?" Kerryan asked.
"Yeah, where are we going anyway?" Emz replied.
"If I told you that, it wouldn't be a secret!" Kerryan teased.
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Kerryan and Emz had been friends since they were 10 years old. They were 15 now, and gorgeous. Emz was blonde, and the cutest thing on earth. She had light blue eyes, and wore a lot of pink. She looked like a princess, and was very popular, but shy. Kerryan was a complete opposite. She had dyed red hair, thick black eyelashes, very cool, and never too far from her beloved skateboard. They both got good grades, and loved school. They were nice girls, but if you tried to get in the way of there "Rule Bending" strategy, god help you.2

"You look really nice," said Keryan. She gave her the once over. Emz was wearing a pink t-shirt, with a black rose on it, and a denim mini-skirt, with her favourite belt, love 2 hate. "Hey! You stole my belt!" She cried.
Emz frowned, "I hoped you wouldn't notice..."
"No worries babe."
Kerryan climbed into the diver seat, of her black and red minivan, which she had painted herself. She was wearing a red and black striped t-shirt, which said, "Stop stalking me!" And a yellow miniskirt.

2 be continued...3

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  • disturbedgirl2005
    April 8, 2006
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    its really good so far keep going id lvoe to read more..

    overall: 5.