As I get off the train I notice a guy who’s been on my tail since Smith get off at the same stop as I do. I wonder about this but dismiss the though of him following me. Yeah right Tiffany gets a grip ok it’s not a story he’s not following you it’s your imagination. I start on the 20 minute walk to my apartment walking briskly in the cold winter night. I look behind me as I hear foot steps coming closer moving slightly to my left to get out of the way of them. A hand jerks me around and shoves me against the wall holding a rag over my mouth. I inhale something that was on the rag. I try to look around but all I see is black as I pass out slumping into my kidnappers arms. 1
When I wake up I’m chained to a wall in what looks like a dungeon. I blink slowly trying to get the little white spots out of my way so that I can see around the room more clearly. There’s a table across the room with a man looking down at it. I look closer and see that it’s a bunch of whips and chains on the table. I gasp as he picks up the cat of nine tails. He clicks a button and I gasp as I begin to turn around on the wall as if by magic strings I can’t see. With my back towards him I can’t see really well that he’s going to do to me.2
I hear the whip chasing across the floor as he draws it back to strike the first strike. I scream as I feel the spikes digging into my flesh pulling some off with it as its owner pulls it away. Replacing it with a single whip slapping my ass with it a few times I get turned around once more. I finally see my captures face. I gasp as I see the face I’ve been looking at for so long and never realizing who was really in that beautiful body and graceful body of his. 3
“Jose what are you doing” I manage to sputter out. Still trying to get my mind wrapped around this whole things. My boyfriend has kidnapped me to play and rape me? That can’t be right. 4
He slaps me across the face hard making me scream out. He shoves his penis inside me making me scream at his harshness in my pussy almost ripping my walls. He begins to pound into me raping me, if you can call it that. I scream for him and try not to move too much I realized he doesn’t like that while I’m his like this. He scratches me and starts to drag his nails painfully down my stomach as he comes closer to climaxing. He keeps pounding into me and finally blows his load all over me and inside me.5
He looks at me and grins “I hope you liked that my dear.”6
I gasp and shake my head “oh baby. You bet I did lover. But you didn’t have to kidnap me damn.”
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I hope you enjoy....Its a good story in my eyes.
Please tell me what you think
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It's good, but i don't like Rape scenes, or similar to rape scenes, it panics me, i guess that's bad, but seeings as i don't like guys it sorta scares me, i like things rough, but DAMN!! i like biting and scratching, but not to the point where it hurts, well, sometimes anyway. Keep it up, most definatly interesting, to say the very least.
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welllllllll.
that jose guy
hes a little weird.
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coolness
this was a wicked story and you should totally continue it love brittbeginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 5.
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Well, it's a bit short, and it has grammar errors...everywhere, but it was an interesting write. It would make a good continuance, I think, or even a part of your Jose series. Sounds a little too painful to be fun. *Shrugs* But if that's what cracks your toes.
Lol...
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thanks lol.
i enjoy it i might contunie it.
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