Betty heard a soft knock on her front door as she toweled herself dry. She grabbed a flimsy robe and wrapped herself tightly before walking barefoot to the door and opening it. Before her stood a sexy blonde haired dream of a man, holding her new mattress up next to him. She smiled and moved out of the way as he dragged it through the house to her bedroom down the hall. She watched his body as he struggled with the heavy thing. His bare arms bulged as he lifted it onto the bed frame and his leg muscles contracted as he pushed it with his knees fully onto the frame. 1
“I’ll go get the papers for you to sign.” 2
She licked her lips as she stared at his butt as he walked out of the room. The perfect cheeks swayed with each step and a familiar heat began to build in her. She loosened the knot of the belt holding her robe closed and sat down carefully on her new bed; its soft pillow top swallowed her. She heard him reenter the bedroom and sat up, not bothering to readjust her robe. He handed her the clipboard with the papers to sign and she signed. As she handed his pen back to him, she noticed him gazing at her exposed breasts. She lie back on the bed and her robe opened completely, revealing her bare flesh seductively. 3
“Won’t you help me put new sheets on it? It’s so hard to do it alone.” 4
She smiled when he nodded and got up to get some sheets. He helped her make the bed, stealing glances at her exposed body as she bent to tuck things in. 5
“It’s got a crease here, let me make sure you did it right.” 6
She walked quickly around the bed, enjoying the soft breeze her quick pace created over her body. He stepped back out of the way, as she bent and tucked the sheet in and the crease disappeared. She bent over the bed and ran her hand over the soft material of the sheets, allowing her robe to lift ever so slightly to expose her bottom. She stood up and grabbed her comforter and he helped her get it just right. She smiled and laid on top of the comforter, her robe covering nothing but the bed beneath her, she turned her head at looked at him as she put a single finger to her nipple circling it gently. 7
“Come on, try it out with me, I would really like someone else’s opinion about this pillow top thing.” 8
He slowly came to stand next to her legs and sat down before laying back, their shoulders barely touched. She rolled over and straddled him in a flash and smiled down at him as shock splashed across his face. She began unbuttoning his work shirt and spread it away from his chest, hungrily dipping her lips to his bare flesh. His skin tasted a little salty from sweating as he hauled her bed into the house. She ran her tongue over him and took a nipple into her mouth; his gasp of delight sent a shiver of desire through her. She lifted her mouth and kissed him, tasting him almost drowning in his lips. He moved his hips beneath her and she felt his erection through his work shorts. Moving away from his lips, she crawled lower on his body and began unzipping his shorts with her teeth as he watched with lips parted in open desire. A film of sweat coated his upper lip as he watched. 9
Tugging his shorts down along with his underwear, he spilled out eagerly for her to see. She took it in her hands and stroked it gently, enjoying the small moans he breathed at her touch. Letting her tongue trace a circle around the tip before she slid her mouth down the length of him, his yell of delight hit her. She sucked him off for a while before she could stand it no longer and had to have him inside her. 10
Sliding up his body, she guided him at her entrance and slid down the length of him, crying out as the pleasure rolled through her. Rocking her hips above him, she sat up and pinched her nipples; his hands pushed hers away and replaced them. He moved beneath her, filling her even more than before and her body began to tighten. She screamed as her body exploded in pleasure and collapsed on top of him. He rolled her over and slowed the pace as he began really exploring her body with his hands. 11
His lips trailed kisses over her neck and chest, stopping to suckle each nipple before dipping lower. He pulled out of her, still fully erect, and dipped his tongue to her pussy. His hands held her hips as he rod her with his tongue until she cried out with the intensity of it and spilled her own juices over his eager tongue. He slid up her body and pressed a sensual kiss to her lips. She tasted her own musky juices and moaned against his mouth, wanting more. As she swallowed her juices down he filled her once more, she cried out with pleasure almost immediately. He continued to slam into her, each time spiraling her down into the depths of passion. Finally, her world exploded once more and she saw stars as her body exploded beneath his. 12
He slowed his pace as she rode wave after wave of ecstasy. Suddenly he pulled out and rolled her gently onto her stomach, she understood instantly and lifted onto her hands and knees. He filled her again; she had thought she could climb no higher, but he quickly lifted her higher than she had ever been before. He cried out with her as they both climbed higher and higher. With one final thrust, they both shot over the edge of reason. They swirled as time ceased to exist, he filled her with his warm seed and she cried out with complete abandon riding the waves. 13
She collapsed on the bed and rolled onto her back to look up at him. His cock hung limp between his legs and he panted as he gazed down at her. She slide off the bed and stood before him, kissed him gently and went to the closet to begin dressing. When she had finished, she turned and saw him fully clothed as well. She went to her purse on her dresser, gave him a nice tip, and watched his exquisite ass move as he walked out of the house.
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Author notes
A nice steamy delivery...
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Good delivery
but I would flesh this out with more heat.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 2, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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Excellent
Very well written, and "steamy" as you said. Unfortunately you appear to have a typo in paragraph 12 - it should be "rode" I think rather than "rod". Other than that a great write. -
Erotic
Loved how you described the climax, and the last line, how it ties it all up. Very, steamy, very sexy, very erotic.
beginning: 2, language: 4, plot: 3, ending: 5, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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very steamy, hot!
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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very differentbut nicely done
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Nice
Definitely hardcore, very nice, i like how you emphasise how much pleasure can be found just in the deapths of your partners breathing, brilliantly done, great work. luvs, becca -
very nicely done!
overall: 7.
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wow that was hot
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cool
The story was great and ending is wonderfulbeginning: 5, language: 2, plot: 2, overall: 5, ending: 1, dialog: 2, characters: 2.
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Very Erotic
You write much better erotica than I do. The plot was predictable. The dialog was good, but one sided. The story was very hot and exciting sexually. Made me wish I was the delivery man. This could easily be adapted to a screenplay for a porn flick. The characters were not deeply developed, but that might have been a distraction.beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 3, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 3.
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Seductive and sexy
awsome sex so descriptive i loved how she fucked the delivery man. it kept my attention and it made me horny like fuck. so now i will go masturbate to the thoughts of this story thank you lolbeginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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Nice and hot
That was a an effective bit of erotica that I am sure most women can relate to. Attractive semi-stranger comes to my door...should I? I never do, but the thought is there. I liked the premise that it was a mattress deliverer. It provided a useful prop that allowed for all sorts of suggestive bending over and muscle flexing, and it made for a convenient canvas for the sex. I liked how "he spilled out eagerly"....evocative and yummy. I was disappointed, though, in the overuse of the word "higher" in the penultimate paragraph. Overall, a very solid effort.beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 4, overall: 6, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 4.
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wow....I think we all need a guy like that around the house.
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, overall: 6, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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awesome
As always you never cease to amaze me wit your work.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 8, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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