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Biting my lip, I left the room mulling his shrill, ambiguous words.
Now twenty minutes later, washing dishes, I search for enigmatic thoughts, while in the background he laughs loudly, watching television.5

At the last rinsed fork, I smile, realizing anger doesn't burst from his mouth like laughter, but instead begins and ends in silence.6

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  • Peteskid
    June 7, 2008

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    i like this one, very thoughtful; human nature, habits, and how we learn and grow...i like the depth here gives something to think about...h


    • gaze
      June 7, 2008
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      Digging? Don't let words mislead you, I don't do dishes that often and certainly don't go away to think about words without discussing them before
      Thanks h


  • voices
    April 9, 2008
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    that last line, yeah, you "KNOW"

    ever heard of chinaski?