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Biting my lip, I left the room mulling his shrill, ambiguous words.
Now twenty minutes later, washing dishes, I search for enigmatic thoughts, while in the background he laughs loudly, watching television.5
At the last rinsed fork, I smile, realizing anger doesn't burst from his mouth like laughter, but instead begins and ends in silence.6
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Please tell me what you think
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i like this one, very thoughtful; human nature, habits, and how we learn and grow...i like the depth here gives something to think about...h


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Digging? Don't let words mislead you, I don't do dishes that often and certainly don't go away to think about words without discussing them before

Thanks h
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that last line, yeah, you "KNOW"
ever heard of chinaski?


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Bukowski?
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