The Lost Girl

There was once a young girl she was about thirteen and she had lost her family and friends and everything she owned in a house fire over a year ago. She was the only survivor cuz she was out at the park jus sitting there when the fire occured and she had no one to turn to now. The girl only wanted to be happy but without family there was no way she could be or so she thought. She had a face of white ivory that always cried black tears, her hair a golden blonde with pretty curly ringlets rolling over her face. She had eyes of the prettiest deepest blue you have ever seen. She slept in the alley behind the little Chinese resturant there in the middle of town. She ate whatever was left over that they threw in the trashcan that night and she had lived like this for a long time. She had no friends and she had no money to go to school so she lived on like this and she cried every night.
Then one night one of the young workers that had to close the resturant heard a russling sound in the trash can and he climbed up and looked inside. What he saw shocked him and he looked at the young girl and offered to take her home with him. She said i'll go but how old are you and where do you live? He said i am 17 and i live about ten minutes from here and i live by myself with my sixteen year old sister, Kayla. My name is Austin and the young girl said mine is April So i bet you will enjoy it there the little girl said thanks and they headed to his car and he drove her to his house.
Things went smooth for a while the one night things April couldn't explain started happening. She'd wake up in the morning and she would be sore in places like between her legs he nipples and her ass. She would also wake up with a really bad headache all the time and she'd start throwing up. This went on for about three months and she never figured out what was going on and one day she went in the kitchen to get something to drink and she saw Austin and kayla putting something in her drink and she ran out of the kitchen. They brought her the drink and she took it upstairs to her room and poured it in the toilet and went and laid in her bed as if nothing had happened. They came in that night and she had fell asleep and the pulled her gown up over her head and started roughly touching her in places she should have never been touched. Then Austin did the unthinkable and he pulled off his clothes and without a condom or anything he stuck his dick inside her and he roughly raped the little girl and she had no clu what was going on. They had came in earlier and had drugged her up and she wouldn't know what happend the next morning then Kayla had to have her turn with the girl and she did everything she could and April almost was killed during it all.
The next morning April was so sick that she could barely breath and she was so sore that she couldn't hardly walk. She saw blood all over the covers and she knew exactly what they had done to her. She started crying and that night while they were sleeping she snuck down the stairs and out the door and ran back to the alley where she used to live and when she got there she saw that some one had left a suitcase lying there. So she went and opened it and saw all kinds of money inside so she stuffed her purse full and hid the rest under some trash. The next morning went to the store and bought her some clothes. Then she grabbed the suitcase and took it with her and she went and rented a apartment and bought a car.
About two months later she was still sick as before so she went to the doctor and they ran sum tests on her. After they ran all the tests they needed to they tested her for a pregnancy and then they had to break the news gently to her that she was pregnant. She broke down into teras and she went to the police and told them what they had done to her and both Austin and Kayla were arrested cuz they found all the proof they needed. Austin and Kayla were stupid and they videotaped the whole thing and then they gave the tape to April, who showed it to the cops. They were both locked away for a really long time.
Nine months later she had a beautiful baby boy that she named Michael. She realized that he was an angel sent from heaven and she cared for him like no one had ever cared for her and now she finally had something to call her own. Then one day she was walking through twon and she met this boy named Jason and he was seventeen years old and she asked him where he lived. He replied back i don't have anywhere to live and she said you can live with me if you want. He took her up on the offer and after about two months of him living there she started to fall in love with him. One night they were sitting on the couch watching movies and he leaned over and kissed her and that was the beginning of their relationship. They started dating and after they had been dating almost two years he asked her to marry him. Her reply was yes and she started to cry tears of joy. Two months later they were married and April, Jason, and baby Michael lived happily ever after the rest of their lives.1

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i hope you guys enjoy this story cuz it was really hard to write it took bme over 3 hours on a school night so enjoy it well at least i hope you do

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  • kissed angel
    April 29, 2007

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    omg i loved this. sad at the beggining, horrible at the middle, sweet and happy at the end! GREAT write keep it up!
    *kissed angel*

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Linda King CT-USA
    April 4, 2006
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    so sweet in the end

    i lived through rape and abuse, and the story you wrote is pretty accurate, but where did the money come from?

    beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 5, overall: 6, ending: 3, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • Summer Darktree
    April 4, 2006
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    it is well done, however it seems simplistic, to me it is writtenin a simple tone, like you were telling a fairy tale to a child, i mean no offense by this, that's just how it came across to me, the idea it good and it ends in a fairy tale kind of way, for a child story it would be good, kinda reminds me of a grimms fairy tale but that is me. Another thing would be go and punctuate the dialog, you leave it in the story with out adding quotes, that would help.I could see this as a childs story, not an adult book, but it was still a good read.

    beginning: 3, language: 2, plot: 3, overall: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 2, characters: 3.

  • Darc Soul
    April 3, 2006

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    amazing yet sad

    i really did like this, at first it was really sad and horrible but i am glad that she chose to keep her baby and raise him and that she met someone really nice that loved her and her son. this was a really good write thanks for sharing ~Scentedangel78~

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.