As she watches Him walked out her bedroom door she closes her eyes and tries to absorb everything that has happened to her today. Suddenly she remembers the time. Her husband was coming home early and she had to get supper ready. Swinging her legs out of the bed she moans softly as her feet touch the floor. Her tired body reminds her of the rough play she endured as she reaches to turn on the shower.
After a quick shower she places fresh sheets on the bed and tidies up just in time to hear her husband’s keys in the door as he calls out, “Honey, I’m home.” She turns from the sink to greet Him and freezes in her tracks. There is her husband and the new neighbor standing in her kitchen. Fear rushes over her as her husband tells her that He is their new neighbor and He had met Him as He drove up. She manages to be polite as a blush creeps across her face as the neighbor is biting into an apple as the husband makes the introductions. Swallowing hard as she remembers how He used an apple on her.
She turns back to the sink and continues to tidy up as the men exchange small talk. Her husband excuses Himself to go upstairs to change His clothes. She keeps her back turned not wanting to look at the neighbor knowing what control He has over her. A soft scream escapes her lips as she feels His hot breath against her neck. Roughly kicking her legs apart He slips His hands under her skirt and begins to finger her pussy. She tries to turn and He tells her, “ Cum bitch! all over my hands before your husband comes back through that door.” Moaning in her ear he calls her, “His little cum slut,” as she grips the sink and explodes on His fingers. Removing his finger He reaches in front of her and sticks them in her mouth. Shaking her head no He twists her nipples whispering in her ear, “I did not ask you I’m telling you. Suck then clean bitch.” Too scared not to obey Him she sucks His fingers clean as she feels her juices slipping down her legs.
Once she is done He spins her around and shows her His hard cock. He points to the floor and tells her, “on your knees slut and suck me off and be fast about it.” She glances up the stairs hoping her husband does not come down the stairs because she has so wanted to suck His cock all day. Greedily she begins licking His cock. He reaches and slides His hands into her hair and jerks her head back. “Suck it bitch do not play with it” as He rams her throat she gags. His soft moans filling the kitchen as she sucks Him hard and fast knowing her time is limited. As His cock explodes and slides so smoothly down her throat He holds her head still letting His cock jerk and throb in her mouth. Pulling His cock out and zips His pants just as her husband comes down the stairs looking at His wife who is on her knees and asks, “why are you on your knees?” Her face beet red as the neighbor winks and says “Oh, She was just giving me back my apple.”
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Sweet & Cruel
Gurl, I'm glad to say that you haven't disappointed me
To torture and frighten the poor little wife is sweet sublime, and how could anyone just not succumb to such a cruel, demanding yet mysterious neighbour? (But he's gotta be cute)
I can't believe I missed this final chapter, and I'm also relieved to see you've been writing again.
Cheerio, hun
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, overall: 9, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 4.
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Hmmmmmmm
She takes a lickin' and keeps on tickin'. Seems very much that she likes the rough stuff this neighbor offers. Verb tense problems. Confusion between present and past tense. Dialog is not strong. Characters are not really well develop. The story reads well and holds attention. Good story.beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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tsk tsk sis, here you thought you would be finished with this story by writing this chapter, hate to tell you, but i can see where you can, need to and will add more to this story. you can't leave it hanging like this. great story.
beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.



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