Strength and Weakness

My strength is independence.1

My weakness is wanting a man.2

My strength is knowing.3

My weakness is believeing.4

My strength is friendship.5

My weakness is friends.6

My strength is love.7

My weakness is caring for others.8

My strength is passion.9

My weakness is lust.10

My stregth is work.11

My weakness is school.12

My strength is not careing what others think.13

My weakness is wanting to know.14

My strength is God.15

My weakness is sin.16

My strength is learning.17

My weakness is sleeping.18

My strengths are weak.19

My weaknesses are strong.20

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I try not to give in to my weaknesses22

But if I do, it makes me strong.23

Ronesha24

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  • Neomaxizoondweebie
    April 11

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    I love the contradictions of weak and strong--I think it says a lot about the human nature. I rate it an eight! I really liked it! (You mispelled caring, but oh well .)


  • MsAlee gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Fantastic! I see so many of these things as my strengths and weaknesses in life. I know the harsh reality of having to chose between your strength and your weakness.


  • Much-Dipstick
    August 16, 2008

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    I loved this. Superb! I loved the two sides to everything. Flip side to every coin, ying yang, other shoe, whatever you want to call it. It's brilliant and such an interesting take on life. Particularly the finishing two lines, which summed it up beautifully and perfectly. I don't like rating stuff out of ten really... but if you insist: 9/10. Good job! Check a couple of typos and keep writing stuff like this, it's amazing. !


  • tallblondie gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    I like how you constantly compare one statement to the other - a bit like the ying and yang of your personality. 8/10 Well done!


  • emperess27
    March 13, 2008
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    I really do like this poem. I think it s interesting. Well done. 9/10


  • The Golden Son
    February 20, 2008

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    6.5 Out of 10

    I don't really understand a lot of these comparisons. Some of the weaknesses are actually good, and others not at all. I just don't seem to get it.


  • Jonas Scott
    August 22, 2007

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    3(pi). Yes, thats right 3(pi).

    I liked all but the end. I don't see how giving into weaknesses makes one stronger..


  • Dark Angel Reborn
    January 21, 2007

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    I like it, but i think you could do something to grab the readers attention more..i found my mind drifting just a bit. I liked your idea though. I'd probably rate it a six or a seven.


  • ritebymidnite
    July 1, 2006
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    10, and I MEAN IT!!!

    Your poem is very relatable to how everyone has as many strengths as well as weakenesses, I write some poetry, but I'm bad at it. I love this poem! Thank you for sharing it.

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