sad silence

World Trade Center sad silence sept.11,2001 through the eye of an 17 year old girl1

I heard the glass hit the ground even though i seen it on the tv. i could feel the pain go though so many life lines even thought so many heard their screams. little children wait for parents to come home but only thing that will love that will always be with them. An invisible hand gently touching their cheek.2

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i wrote this after 9-11

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  • sufficated
    April 12, 2006
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    undecided

    i liked it.it was different.something no one thinks bout ne mor cause it happened so long ago.

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  • lovin-casey
    April 10, 2006
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    Hey girl! you put this kind of stuff into such simple wording! I know for a fact it wasn't just like that but you put it in a simple way that everyone can understand! i am happy that you can put stuff in a simple way for such a hard situation! this couldn't have been to easy to write! well i will talk to you later! bye

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    • lovin-justin
      April 11, 2006
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      thank you

      thank you sis
      i try to do that b/c you know me if it is not in the simple wording ypou call it i could not be able to write it or even say it with out help from people like you thank you again sis becca