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The park is full of strangers.2
But they all come here everyday, they have nowhere else to go.3
So they go there.4
David stands in the sun, smiling to himself and laughing at the man sat on the swings. He knows what that man did, but David has done worse.5
He stands in the sun thinking that it shines only for him. 6
Is shines so bright that it burns off and blisters David’s skin. He loves the sun, as it shines just for him, only on him, burning only him.7
It makes him feel special. 8
He knows he is special, more special than the girl on the bench, more special than the man on the swing and more special than the man in the dark.9
He hates the man in the dark, he scares David. 10
Because that man looks exactly like David.11
He is better than the man on the swings because that man is heading straight for hell.12
But the sun has burnt out David’s eyes and the grey wind has swept away the ashes to were the man in the dark lies.13
What David cannot see.14
Is that he is already in hell.15
Author notes
the third one in the park life series.
wierdy wierd wierd.
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Comments
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A very good idea. Good executing of it. Some repititions are there which you easily could have avoided and then it would be much more better
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Isn't this already posted?
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Ooooh Still a little weird, but it is ok...Good job ^.^
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