From your day of birth,1
To your youngest years,2
Your life was filled with,3
Adventures, laughter and;4
rejoicing friends.5
Like the winds of time,6
Years pass you by,7
Inspirations of Opera's;8
and Crossing the9
Point of No Return.10
Dancing tango to the music11
Of Roxeanne and dreaming;12
The Music of the Night. 13
You've shown the world your14
Ready and music is your guide.15
Happy Birthday Southern Belle,16
wishes from me and others,17
may the day you turn 18;18
be the day your music19
takes flight...20
*HAPPY B-DAY!!!!*
Author notes
A/N: This is poem for a friend, SOuthern Belle who turns the big 1-8 saturday! HAHAHA! I am still older than you! 
What did you think? Please comment!
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this was very sweet. I hope she enjoyed reading this. I wish I had friends that would write poetry for me. Hell I kind of wish my boyfriend would at least write me a little something.
oh well, a girl can only dream right? lol.
Good job. Very cute.
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I loved it! I liked the references to opera, Phantom Of The Opera, etc. Happy birthday to your friend.
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Aweee I wish someone would write something like that for MY birthday! *goes away and pouts*...
To whoever this was dedicated to, happy birthday!
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awww...so sweet!
Gosh, why didn't anyone wrote that for -my- 18 years old! It really more beautiful than any cards could have done! It was very personal, yet we could all relate to it as readers. I wish the best chances in life. 18 YEARS OLD ROCKS BY THE WAY. But 20 isn't so great meh...
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Wooot!
Haha I'm still only 16, but I tell you what, I'm super pumped for my 18th! Its nice that you wrote the poem for a friend And its so well written.
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Awwwww, very cute. Nice idea! And original too, I don't think I've read something like this before, so great job! Keeep writing, this sort of thing is super and I really enjoyed it, partly because it flowed so well, and more importantly (in my opinion), it sounded as though it really came from the heart. Brilliant job!!!!!!!!
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Wow, it lead very nicely to the outburst of Happy b-day =]
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Heh. Nice. I really get the sense of how lively a person she is. This is probably really late by now, but I hope she had a happy birthday.
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thats an awesome gift to a friend. it is really a sweet poem
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This was very good! lol. This is a great poem for those people who are turning eighteen - keep on writing the great work!
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Very sweet write. I am sure your friend enjoyed this.
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nice
I liked it a lot, I turn 18 in 7 days.. I'm excited!
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That was really sweet! I would have loved to get that in a birthday card!
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Aww!
Aside from the fact that it's a poem and it's supposed to be on AP, I like this. Cute and fun way to say happy birthday to your friend. Hope she enjoyed it! -
Inspiring
Great poem! I recommend it for everyone turning 18!
overall: 8.
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My mom had a c-section you moron.
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Well, this actually touched my soul. Such a sweet poem, and such a wonderful friend you are. I loved how you added elements from Poto, and how you created the perfect Birthday Ballad for your friend. Indeed, Belle, a wonderful Birthday!
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Eh...i don't know
I, personally, like poems with rhyme...so I didn't really enjoy this poem as much,but...it was for someone's birthday, and I don't know if I'd be able to write a birthday poem. I wouldn't know what to say. So...good job. -
This is really sweet poem and happy birthday to you. ps 18 is a wonderful age, thats the age the world changes lol
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HAPPY CAME OUT OF THE PUSSY DAY BELLE
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Very nice way to say Happy Birthday to your friend!!
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A lovely poem
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Awwwwwwww. What a sweet gesture. Great poem.
P.S. Happy B-Day Southern Belle
~LB
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This is awesomeness! I'd cry but I would totally ruin my mascara and that would be a tragedy. I am kinda speechless
. This was awesome and wow. I loave you, you are so freaking awesome!
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