I hate my parents.I don't want to hear them talk to my babysitter crap.I'm tired of it.I'm sick of hearing them talk in Spanish,Tagalog,and others.I'm just sick of it.I hate the way I have to go to my babysitter and never let's me do do anything.I'm tired of it all.I don't want to hear it.Apologize for what I was trying to do?Hell no.I don't give a (beep!) if it'll hurt them.I'm old enough already.I just want to get away from all of you,but you just don't understand.So what if she doesn't want to take care of me?Lose your job?I don't care!I want out of this place and that's final.I so tired of listening to her (beep!) and rules.I don't care if you have rules,I'll break them all.I am so tired of you telling me to shower,practice and do this stuff.I know what to do when I feel like doing it.I don't want to hear it anymore,I don't want to talk it about it.Go away.Leave me alone.Shut your mouth.I despise you for all your arguments.Go ahead yell at me.If you do that,I'll shoot you when you are lying in your coffin.I don't want to know if I bad grades of good.Its just a piece of paper.I don't want to hear it anymore,and I am so sick of it.You are not going to stop me if I run away,or even disobey you.I just can;t listen to all your words.I just ignore it all.You can;t make m do anything.I will not listen to your chores and I'll do what I feel like.I'm going to run away,and that's all I need to do.It really pisses my off what my idiotic babysitter said my attention cannot be jarred.I really felt like hitter her.I don't care if she is 62,she can go to hell if she feels like it.I don't care.Put on my sweater in that prison,ignore my babysitter and go.Sweater,shoes,jacket,backpack,off.I am old enough to make my own decisions.I am old enough to "worry." And I am old enough to love someone.I am in love,and you are not going to change it.I sick of it,and I am sick of you.I do what I want,and I say what I want.I'm not going to listen to you because I Don't Want To Hear It.1
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Great Job
I love how you think of yur parents in this story i hate when my parents are like that half the time i dont even listen and i just go yeah unhuh and there like and there exuse is o i care about you well if you care about me then stop lecturing me omg and i hate how your parents basicly own you you cant so anything without asking them and so they call of the shots i hate that -_- no kid likes that i think well parents go lecture a teacher and see how they like uhuh thats what i though.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 1, characters: 5.
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I like it!! but there were a lot of grammatical mistakes, and you should probably seperate this into multiplie paragraphs, it's hard for the readers eyes to focus when it's all bunched up like this.
Great story, great emtion, great job!!! Keep it up =DD
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"I don't want to hear them talk to my babysitter crap.I..."
Spaces between sentences will clarify this read. Also, the sentence is a teensy bit confusing.
"I hate the way I have to go to my babysitter and never let's me do do anything."
This one too!
Whoa, another stream of conscious writing piece! You can feel the energy -
wow....this is amazing. i know how you feel. its really good to express anger like this. very very good.
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deep
wow, that was deep, i'm glad that you can express yourself through writing poetry, i hope that things work out for you -
I know how you feel. Good write............. Keep up the good work.
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