Acrid #2

Maybe, the living forever approach to life, is the easy way out because the way it is lived means the precious things we never truly appreciate.1

Its another way to live as the truly selfish people we are. After all, if you're going to live forever, why should you value things like family, and friends?2

[Still want to live forever and a day?]3

There is no reason to, because ' tomorrow' the monster that it is, will always win in a battle between laziness and worth, every single time. 4

Just like pride will rule kindness, and jealously over happiness. If living forever is how you live, its just another way to tread on every single person, till you reach the top and then you spend the rest of your 100 year life, treating the rest like worthless pieces of shit on the bottom of your shoe.5

Live forever, and lose any basis for living anyway. Forget those people who gave you everything, even life in the first place. Shove your parents in an old folks home, and be convinced they're not being stolen and lied too. Those Friends that appear for you, only do so both of you can get as much out of each other as you humanly can.6

[Still want to live forever?]7

Take take take, to build that kingdom on a cloud you're waiting for. In your never ending life, what will it take to make you truly happy? Because for all this shit, of 'happiness when others are happy' it won't work. You'll never be able to be happy for anyone else apart from your self, because in your long long life, you never learnt how to love. 8

Your empty life filled with people and possessions will never be a match for happiness. Because of how selfish you truly are, you can't admit that happiness in the way people smile, laugh, and cry is not enough for yourself.9

[Still want to live for a day?]10

And how could you? Who's responsible for the morals you forgot to learn? The feelings you never truly understood or were taught? The attachments you never formed to anyone apart from your greedy self? 11

Not you.12

It would never be you.13

Always someone else's fault.14

Isn't it?15

Hasn't it been? 16

[Still want to live..?]17

Author notes

as before, lemme know what you think, etc.

I dunno, this one is a bit more spiteful then the other one. That was more of an intro I reckon, this ones more of a direct point. Part three'll be up as soon as I next get annoyed. Which'll most likely be tomorrow. Har har har.

Okie, goodnight and have a cool day if ya read this.

Kegger *

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  • Shriven
    March 23, 2006
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    Very good, I'm not sure I agree with all the reasoning, but this is pleasantly challenging.

  • Ryoohki
    March 22, 2006
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    Yay!
    I was looking forward to this. It came a lot sooner than I expected, but it's still amazingly good.
    I can't wait for the third.