Brady at 24 years of age, is quite a hunk. He also gets quite a bit of attention from the ladies. Brady is an physical therapist. One day while at work he receives a email notifying him he won an all expense paid trip. Oh my God, I cant believe it, he said. I could go to any destination i wanted to. Where would i go, he thought? Maybe to the Bahamas i have always wanted to see the beaches. And it would be so romantic, maybe i would even find the girl of my dreams. He went to bed after showering. Tossing and turning all night. As he fell asleep his thoughts turned to finding the one. Dreams of a beautiful lady with brown long hair. The next morning awa
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this is just for a story im working on
NOT AT ALL FINISHED YET
What did you think? Please comment!
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This has the potential to be very good but definatly needs some more before it is ready as it leaves halfway through a sentence.
Never trust junk mail holidays.beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 1, ending: 1, characters: 1.
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From the sound of this, I think it could be a great story. I can't wait to read the rest.
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(I think it needs to be finished so I will come back later hun.)
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