Sunday1
is my favorite
day of the week.
the brothers leave.
Sun shines good-bye.
trees branches wave Adios.2
***3
Empty4
I arrive at school
earlier then usual.
It's quiet.
Teachers pass me
nod
say good-morning.
I disappear inside the library
reading behind the shelves.5
***6
Back row7
Slackers
dopers
rebels
slouch in the back row8
dozing
drool traveling down their arms.
eyes stare at me
following as I sit in the
second row, my usual spot.
notebook flipped open
pen poised to write.9
I know what they're thinking.10
because I'm like
them
I should be in the back row.
I'm supposed to be a slacker.
They don't know
that unlike them
I plan on getting my diploma.11
***12
Wild Man13
Mr.Scump
my bio lab teacher
is a beast-not a man.
He should be outside
living amongst the wild
and untamed.
brown hair covers his meaty
arms. beard a curly bush.
He has a lion's mane for head hair,
and sharp teeth.
his white lab coat makes
him look cool.
he's loud
always dramatizes what we
don't understand
pouncing on tables
as they were prey,
standing on chairs.
Amber Fye
my lab partner
says he's mental.
I say he's unique.14
***15
Here's a riddle16
what do you call
a large room
with tables and chairs
reeks of grease
and lots of noise?17
***18
Answer19
A lunchroom.20
***21
Little square table22
That's our spot.
Mouse and I's.23
We share lunch.
One pays one week
the other the next.
It's my turn.
I eat in silence
while Mouse talks24
head nod here25
head nod there.26
Yes. No. Maybe.27
Serious? Shut up.28
One word. 29
Two word sentences 30
from me.31
Mouse turns away to
flirt with a girl passing by.
My gaze shifts across the room
to the back of Bjou's
long shiny black hair.32
Author notes
I'm sorry I didn't post when I was supposed to. The internet had been down the tuesday I was supposed to post. I bumped into a dead end with the story as well so that's why I haven't posted in awhile. Anyway it's here. Tell me how I'm doing...I think I made West sound like a girl at one part 
What did you think? Please comment!
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lol. I have to re-write Eighteen Candles. I read over everything and saw some really crappy bad stuff that I don't want to keep. So some of the storyline and things that happned in the original are not going to happen in the published version. I have decided to keep the ending. And I decided that Denzel will tell Zale herself instead of her stepmom doing it. lol. I just gave away some stuff so don't tell anybody else!
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Awww bless pooe West... I really love your writing style and I think this is working incredibly well. How's it going with getting Eighteen Candles published? Keep up the grand ol' work, love Jess xxx
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oh my gods...this story is so amazing! Markus sounds like a dick but i love this! hurry up and post more, you've got me so hooked!
s and 
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~Kami
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wah wah wah!! I want more
I hate his brother Markus. Hate hate hate!!! oh well. at least he doesn't have to deal with them at school! sigh. well, I REALLY want West and Bjou to get together...just a suggestion 
please tell me when the next chapter is ready! Thanks 
-Juliette
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this is really great. hope to hear more from you soon.
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You did great
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