More Than Miles Away

I love the way you look at me1

I love the way this feels2

I could talk to you forever3

But Im afraid I cant let go4

The best thing in the world5

Is something with a threat6

A threat of ending and going away7

I hope this never ends8

And if it does, I hope its soon9

If it takes much longer10

Ill be in too deep11

Too deep to turn away12

Too far to let go13

Ive been hurt so bad14

I cant take anymore15

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  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    July 24

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    I know exactly how this feels, and I'll bet several others know too!

    It's dramatic, and saddening. Gosh, insecurity does suck. This is such a trueee piece!

    Well done!


  • terror
    May 27, 2008
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    Dramatic and powerfull while vague, leaving just the feeling without any setting or time

    beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 1, ending: 2, characters: 1.


  • Springs gold member
    June 26, 2007
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    Last login September 7, 2006
    eeeeek.
    you'll never read this, so I'll just leave my eeeeeek. =)


  • toolittletime
    March 21, 2006
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    I love it, so true. Keep up the good work!!!!

  • Babygurl07
    March 21, 2006
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    Awesome!!!!

    Hey gurlie! I love this poem and I totally know who it is about. And yes I know that it was long time ago, even so it is still a really great poem and very full of emotion! I love you to death!!!!

    -Brandy

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