I love the way you look at me1
I love the way this feels2
I could talk to you forever3
But Im afraid I cant let go4
The best thing in the world5
Is something with a threat6
A threat of ending and going away7
I hope this never ends8
And if it does, I hope its soon9
If it takes much longer10
Ill be in too deep11
Too deep to turn away12
Too far to let go13
Ive been hurt so bad14
I cant take anymore15
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I know exactly how this feels, and I'll bet several others know too!
It's dramatic, and saddening. Gosh, insecurity does suck. This is such a trueee piece!
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Dramatic and powerfull while vague, leaving just the feeling without any setting or time
beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 1, ending: 2, characters: 1.
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Last login September 7, 2006
eeeeek.
you'll never read this, so I'll just leave my eeeeeek. =) -
I love it, so true. Keep up the good work!!!!
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Awesome!!!!
Hey gurlie! I love this poem and I totally know who it is about. And yes I know that it was long time ago, even so it is still a really great poem and very full of emotion! I love you to death!!!!
-Brandy
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