It was a quite afternoon. Yuri was walking down the street he normaly dose after school. He was planning on going to sit down and have some coffee and reflect on his week like he dose every friday. Than something caught his eye, his friend and rival Jak was standing in the park, proped up in a park bench staring off into a clearing with a look of pure satisfaction on his face. "Hey Jak!" Yuri yelled, "You okay?!" Jack was a block away and there was little traffic, but Jak had no responce. "Jak! Hey buddy!" He decided to go up and talk to him to avoid any more notice. "Jak, wake up dude." He teasingingly smaked him on the head. "Wha- Oh Hi Yuri!" Jack said happily, "How are you?" 1
"Not so bad. You seem like your happier than anyone today."2
"Oh Yuri... You wouldn't even know."3
Jak's deep and dark brown eyes glistened for a second. His slim and short body and think brown hair seemed to fit perfectly in the park bench. "Well I'm surprised. I haven't seen you this happy since you got a three point lead in math class over my score. What happened?" The taller black haired now young adult sat down with Jak. "Well last n- never mind, yesterday was your birthday. I'm sure you have a better story than me."4
"Hehe. Kid you dont know how right you are."5
"Yuri..."6
"Yea?"7
"...why do you call me kid?"8
"I'm still a week older than you... I have power."9
"I can be just as adult as you Yuri."10
"Haha... well I'll tell you what happened than last night...See if you still agree."11
"Okay!"12
"Man you will never belive what happened last night. I figured since i was 18, I should break in to the school and mess around.... Jak. You okay?"13
He saw a look of almost surprise on Jaks face.14
"Look I only planned to ever break in anywhere once... Anyway." Yuri started off, "I broke into the gym because I know they keep the doors unlocked for kids who weight lift and practice. It wasnt much of a break in, but it was fun. I ran through the halls, into the girls locker room, messed up everybodys clothes, stole some papers from the teachers, it was great."15
"Yuri... was that all you did?"16
Yuri seemed troubled by this question. He got up from the park bench and walked behind it. Jak took off his leather jacket he so dearly prized and put it where Yuri was just sitting. His white tee-shirt now showing seemed to reflect light at Yrui. Yuri didn't like bright colors, he was always more for profesonal looks.17
"Well..." Yuri said almost speachless, "You're going to think I'm nuts."18
"No I wont. C'mon, it cant be as odd as my last night."19
"Haha, you're wrong. I'll just have to beat you in weirdness too."20
"Try your hardest Yuri!"21
"Haha. Well...I was in the Math hall. I looked across the commons and saw a light on in the bio room. I was curious too see if I could get some frogs of something off Doc. Norton. So I walked over. As soon as I turned the handle, the power went out. It was completly dark. I walked in as i heard some one running in the room, possibly to turn the lights on. He tripped and... well... acidentaly kissed me... I liked it... and I could tell by felling his face he was a student. Smaller than me. Possibly 11th grade. I felt... happy for a second, and I...strated taking his shirt off. He removed mine as well. We sat there and kissed and slowly striped the other one down. His skin was cold, and i seemed to warm him up. I grabbed him and pushed him to the floor, I could feel our skin contact each other...and I liked it. I felt his fingers run up my leg and onto my chest...and I never saw him once. Oh but you don't know how great it was. Naked with each other. Holding the other one and pretending we were datinng all out lives. Half an hour later... I thought I heard foot steps. Imediatly I put my cloths back on. I didn't realize it at first but...I may love him..."22
"No lie?"23
"It's all true." Yuri blushed. He sat down back beside Jak. "So," Yuri asked, "what did you do last night?"24
"Well..." Jak started off neviously, "I snuck in the Bio room of Doc. Nortons late at night to get my hands on some chemicals..."25
Author notes
Um don't take this as a sign I am gay. I am happily dating a girl, I just thought it would be a cute story. Sorry if it seems I posted 2ce... One looked messed up when i posted it.. Please disregard it.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Not bad at all, a little predictable, but with romantic-type stories that's usually the case about ninety-nine percent of the time. At first I was a little surprised it wasn't a gay guy or a girl that wrote this ('cause how many straight guys usually write gay romance stories?) but it made sense since it wasn't overly sappy, or too sexual. Good job, for real.

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wow, that was cute and all. I liked it. Good job and good luck.
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cute story, surprise endings are cool
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nice story. You're right. It was a cute story and I liked the ending so much that I smiled wondering what the other dude that had been telling the story, was thinking....awesome!

