Ugh... I can never stop thinking about this.. I HATE your family for what they've done to you.. Especially your Dad.. How do they not see it? I hate how he treats you like he's better than you or something.. It seriously makes me want to hurt him. You always talk like if you ever hit him that he'd hit you back.. Or worse.. And I hate it. I don't understand why you're so afraid of him, though.. I mean, I've seen him, and you don't think I could stop him if he ever tried to do anything to you, but really.. He's just a fat, weak, pathetic excuse for a man, and it wouldn't be hard at all for me to stop him... But ugh.. I hate this. I wish there was something I could do to make him stop treating you like shit.. Well.. What I want to do.. We're not gonna get into that. But I just had to write this, because I hate him for what he's done to you and how he's treated you, how he still is. I hate how there's nothing I can do.. And how he makes you feel. I HATE him. Maybe someday he'll see what he's done to you. I just.. Ugh.. Want to do something about it.. But I can't cause then you'd get into trouble.. I guess I just don't want anyone to hurt you.. And when they do.. I just.. Ugh.. Get pissed off.. How do they not see that you're obviously more than they could ever hope to be? You really are.. You're perfect.. I just wish they'd see you the same way I do.. But I know they never will.. It just bothers the hell out of me.. Oh well.. I'll get over it.. But if your Dad EVER does anything really bad, like hit you or something, it'll be the last time. Because I love you.. I want to protect you, no matter what I have to do, or how much trouble I get in. It's just the way I feel.. Because I love you, Trish. And I always will, no matter what.1
Love,2
Aaron3
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Ugh.. Your Dad seriously pisses me off.. I know I can easily stop him if he ever does something really bad.. But I dunno.. It just makes me mad that they don't see. Oh well.. I'll get over it.
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Woah you must care!!
Grammer there was some problems
diddnt put me off though!!
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Very heartfelt. Just a few proofreading errors like commas, and an OD of "Ugh", but that is normal for the whole Stream-of-consciousness thing you got going on here.
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this is really good. i loved it right through. Great job.
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AAAAAAWWWW!!!!! This is so cute. I know how you feel EXACTLY. I HATE it and i mean hate it with all my guts when trishs dad treats her the way he does, he puts her down so much. she is so pretty and gorgeous and everything and he outs her down and it gets so sooo ticked off. if he ever hit her.....omg....im not even gonna day. but i dont think that he will though.
trish doesnt get that i know why she hates him so much but oh well...good write im glad you made her feel good.
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It makes me mad that they don't see it too..my mom really isn't that bad..but my dad...he's never been there for me..he used to talk about how good I was but on occasion I'd have an attitude...and I got A's and B's and that was good enough...but now he's ALWAYS pointing out what I do wrong..and getting on my case about getting B's cause "I can do better" And all this other stuff...and Aaron...he wont hit me..he has once...and he used to grab me all the time when he was drunk and I tried to run away, but he doen't do that anymore, so don't worry about him ever hitting me or anything, okay? But anyway, I love you too!
And thanks for writing this...it kinda made me feel better...not many people see why I hate him so much...you and Cierra do..but not really anyone else. Love you!! -
i liked this because it showed that u really care. Most people would just blow something like this off...but not u, u acutally cared enough to write ur feelings about it. so i applaud u for that! great job!
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