The Werewolf (chapter 2)

Jericho falls to the ground as soon as he does a dagger flies by his head and goes right through the beast. Jericho becomes unconscious when he regains consciousness he finds him self in the 1

Hospital in the village. He finds his leg in a cast he tries to get up but can’t. A few weeks pass 2

And his leg heals. Jericho leaves the hospital and goes to find the person that saved his life. 3

As he is walking to the village square he hears a faint howl from a werewolf he rushes to the area and sees a boy fighting a beast. Jericho gets one of his blades out a rushes but he is to late the wolf lay dead. Jericho asked the boy his name and the boy said, “my name is jecht”. Jericho asked were did you learn to wield a sword like that. Jecht answered my dad was a great warrior he taught me before he disappeared. Jericho said farewell to jecht and continued on to the town square 4

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  • secretpart
    March 18

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    be careful, you have some lines skipping to a next stanza right in their middle. Also, try to repeat a bit less Jericho's name. Wait a few lines before writing it ^^.

  • PassionsPromise
    April 27, 2006
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    well done

    well done write, had me pinned to my seat cant wait to see what happens.
    god Bless
    Victoria

    overall: 6.

  • christinaumsted
    March 20, 2006
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    cool story

    Good story 1