I finally found the link for 1
dreams when tabs dissolve and 2
I'm caught with no hope of release3
as I dally backstage with an Asian4
boy whose dead eyes and smiles remind5
me of disease.6
I stood there bare chested, choked and tethered7
square; rosewood beads clamped between my 8
gnashing teeth.9
I covered myself when you passed--10
this is not who I am.11
I flinched away, cold sweat on my 12
neck and back as the Sick One whispered 13
slithering promises and lies in my ear.14
He took me to your hotel room,15
I slept in your bed - you never came.16
I found myself in a sundress, warm17
sunlight on my face and arms,18
I wrecked my hot-air balloon in19
your backyard--20
Like it was an accident.21
Your bodyguard was kind and as22
I inspected your old cars, he looked23
for a patch.24
I waited for you to notice me.25
Author notes
Sometimes dreams just don't let go, even during waking hours.
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Very interesting!
slithering promises and lies in my ear.-- My favorite part!
I'm not sure I grasped all your piece's meaning..it was kinda hard to follow sometimes, but i really enjoyed its flow. -
Very powerfull. Not really sure whats happening but powerfull all the same. I know the kind of dream you mean, ones that make no sence but cannot be forgoten.
beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 3, characters: 2.
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This was awesome....I know what you mean whenever you said "sometimes dreams just dont let go, even in the waking hours." Good write.
Broken Essence -
You are totally the queen of abstractism or whatever. It's cool how you can take a bunch of jumbled up thoughts and make something out of it. Awesomeness as always, hope you feel better soon!
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