What I Had In Mind

You stand there all smug and superior. Baby you have no Idea what you've awaken. Let me tell you what I have in mind. You said you want to lie there, so fine lay there. I'll take off all your clothes; just lay there while I unbutton my shirt. Peeling it off of my body. Now I'm standing there, wearing my jeans and bra. I unbuckle my belt and unzip my pants. I remove my pants and still you lay there. I'll crawl up your body to kiss that smug smile away. I'm kissing your lips, chin as I move to your neck. I straddle your hips while I trace your chest. I feel you harden between my legs. I move my hips grinding my pelvis into yours. I take your hand and kiss your palm, running my tongue along your fingers. I suck your finger, moving my tongue all around it. Especially, your finger tip moving my tongue between your skin and nail.<o ></o >

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Let me skip ahead and tell you this. I'll pull off your boxers with my teeth, as I run my tongue up your leg making my way to your hip. <o ></o >

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Should I take you into my mouth?<o ></o >

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Yes, I like that idea. I'll run my tongue around it, along till the tip. Rolling it in my mouth, I'll apply some pressure on the very tip sliding my tongue across the slit. I'll close my lips around the head, as I suck you in. pulling you deep into my mouth…<o ></o >

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I'm getting bored… I'll tell you what I'll do with my hips. So if I run your cock along my pussy, letting you feel my heat and moisture. Would that interest you? I'll move you along and around. Letting you in, but just the head barely inside. I'll raise my hips, as I lean backward. Careful if you move you might slip out. I'll lean back and then I'll slam into you. I'll raise myself again, till you almost slip out then I'll clench my muscles holding you tight. I move my hips in a circle, and then… u guessed right… I'll slam back into you…<o ></o >

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This is just an idea of what I have in my mind. So tell me what do you think????<o ></o >

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  • Nermin Nazim
    April 20, 2006
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    hot and hot and hot

    It is hot and as good as the foreplay, best part,eih?

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 10, ending: 5, characters: 5.


  • Nermin Nazim
    April 20, 2006
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    hot and hot and hot

    It is hot and as good as the foreplay, best part,eih?

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 10, ending: 5, characters: 5.


  • Lionslove
    March 26, 2006
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    HOT!!! LOVE THIS GIRL

    Hey...you already know what i think.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 7, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • eamarti
    March 22, 2006
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    Great write

    Firstly, thanks for your kind comments on my poem Fair Play. Well what can I say, a very powerful and sensual piece of writing - I better go and dunk my head in a tub of water now! You have a lot of talent

  • necremuusd
    March 22, 2006
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    just my luck i end up reading something like this when im talkin to my bestfriend britt and it makes me want her... to see if she would to do this to me.

  • queenmab
    March 20, 2006
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    HA HA
    that's great
    make them squirm

  • Lionslove
    March 20, 2006
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    phewww!!! whoa....hot.

    gulp!! ahhem....this isn't fair, ayten. i have to concentrate today (smiling eyes). great write!! creative. nice quick pace..yet not too fast. one thing though...and this is my ignorance - what the hell (laughing at myself) do all those symbols with the tongue face mean? anyway...enjoyed as usual. looking forward to more of your book this week.

    atb, Lionslove

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