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I made my way with Harry, Ron, and the rest of the Griffendors to the common rooms where I had been so many times before with Fred and George, but this time I was going to be living in it. To me this was the greatest feeling in the world, besides flying of course. I made my way up the stairs with Hermione, unfortunately, to the girls common rooms. I quickley unpacked, fed Mutaii and Jim Bob some treats, crawled into bed, and fell usleep almost immediatly. It wasn't a dreamless sleep though. i kept seeing Draco, and this botherd me. We were together, older, and dating, and if Draco grew up to look like this I was in luck. because he was tall, as pale as allways, had swooshy bangs instead of that horrid slicked back look he had now, but his eyes were as beautiful as ever.2
The next morning I awoke to Mutaii's hungry meow and a beautiful, sunny, windless, day.3
" \A perfect day for flying\, " I thought.4
" All right allready! I'll feed you, cat! "5
" It's abou time that cat's been meowing all morning, "remarked hermione.6
" If you were so annoyed, why didn't you feed him yourself? "7
" I would have, but I don't know where its food is."8
" *It* is a he, and he has a name. And it is Mutaii. You're a witch arent you? Why didn't you just conjure up some food? "9
" I don't know how. I'm muggleborn. Remember? I don't have a clue how to do stuff like that."10
" Fine excuse, Hermione. "11
I reached under my bed and pulled out my broom, then I made my way down to the great hall. Imideatly I saw him sitting there all proud and full of himself. Before I could think any more on it I heard Harry calling me.12
When I got to the table and sat down he said, " I didn't think we could have brooms. "13
" I have a spot set for me on the Quiditch team. Plus I've lived there since I was one . "14
" Realy? Why? "15
'' My father left my mother before I was born, and my mother was killed by Voldemort. "16
At this Ron flinched.17
'' Oh, you big baby. Why do you get so worked up? He'll problably never come back thanks to Harry. "18
'' It's the problably I'm worried about. Of all people yoou should be worried. I mean he did try to kill you, Hope. What makes you think he wont do it again? ''19
" Give it a rest you two, " Harry butted in and said.20
'' Moody, little chap arent you? " I said21
After breakfast, we headed down to the flying range, and there wsa Draco and his two goons, Crabbe and Goule. Madam Houche came into the flying range and gave us instuctions on what to do. She told us to lie our rooms on the ground and say " up" . Once we all had our brooms up, , this took Hermione a while and Ron's nose was bleeding from where his had hit him in the nose, Madam Houche told us to mount our broos and push off. I could do this in a breeze, but \Neville\ beat me to it . He got up in the air, and lost control of his broom. When he finally fell to the ground he had a broken wrist.22
Before Madam Houche took him to the hospital wing she told eb=very one to stay on the ground, but some of us just don't listen. Draco walked over ot where Neville had fell and picked up hos remembral, and said, " mabey if the fat lard had given this a squeese he would have remembered to fall on his fat bunny. ''23
Harry then decided to be all heroic and said, '' Give it here Malfoy. ''24
I know it's wrong, but for some reason I couldn't take my eyes off of Draco. I don't know what else they said, because by this time they were both up in the air. But I know that Harry must have said something to bunny him off, because he threw the remembral at the roof. Harry quickly flew towards it and caught it just in time. When he landed every on cheered for him, that was untill Grandma came out and took him inside.25
Draco snigered, then walked toward me and said, " I bet he'll be expelled for that. I don't know why you hang around with these low lifes. I thought your familley was better than this. Why don't you join us."26
" No thanks. I'd rather not. 'Comon, Ron, lets go see if Harry survived." I lied. In thuth I did want ot go with him.27
When we got to the Great Hall Harry quickley told us how he had met Wood and made the Quiditch team. Every one was extactic. Harry was going to be the youngest Seeker in over a century. The day went by quickly, and when I went to bed I fell asleep at once.28
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this was really neat how you were able to make this a type of fan fictional write about HP!!!i forgot what Draco's eyes looked like...but they sound pretty hott!!! LOL well, this got me interested in Harry Potter again. now i will have to pick up the book or something.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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oo i like this and i like where it is going ^_^ oc/draco is one of my favorite pairings too. my only negative comment is that you only have to do a little spell check. its mostly typos, thats all
besides that, i love the content and how you use real events from the books in your story. i cant wait to read the next part

