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I remember it like it was yesterday. It was the best day of my life. It was the day of the district solo competition. I had just received a superior score and decided to stop by my Friend Tiffany's house to tell her the news. 2
"Hey Ms. Watson," I said as I entered the living room. Me and Ms. Watson (Tiffany's mom) was real cool. Tiffany was my ex-girlfriend and I hadn't seen her since we broke up. Tiffany was in her room, lying on the bed watching T.V. 3
"Whaz good?" I said poking my head through her slightly open door. 4
Obviously shocked by my arrival, a broad smile spread across her face. 5
"Hey whats up?" she asked. 6
"Nothin', just seein what you was up to"7
"I aint doin nothin but watchin T.V. Whats up wit you, you look like you tired."8
"Oh yeah, I just came from solo competition. Let's just say, I made it to State."9
"Congratulations," she said as she stood and gave me a hug. Except it didn't really feel like a hug, more like an embrace. The minute our bodies touched, I could feel her nipples harden a little. Noticing her sudden erection, she let me go. 10
"Sit down and watch T.V. with me. I haven't seen you in a while."11
We sat and watched T.V. for hours. I looked up at the clock and it read 10:30 p.m. It was about time for me to head home. I didn't have a curfew, but I liked to get some good sleep on school nights. 12
Just as I got up to leave, Tiffany grabbed my hand and pulled me back down onto the bed. For a few moments we just sat there staring into each others eyes. 13
"What?" I asked breaking the trance. 14
"I been thinkin," she started.15
"About what?"16
"Us... and how we never got well... intimate."17
Why would she be bringin this up now, after we broke up? I loved to have sex and she never wanted to. That's one of the reasons we broke up.18
"Well... everytime we were alone and had all the freedom in the world, you turned me down."19
"I know... its just that... I really care about you... and I was waiting for that one special moment. And now... I think I'm ready."20
"Now!!! Girl yo mamma is in the next room and yo big brother is down the hall."21
"Don't worry, they're sleep. We just gone have to be quiet." 22
There was no way I could turn her down. The way her sexy brown eyes turned me on, and the way her smile made me want to pleasure her. She didn't have nothin on but a tank top and a short skirt. She was lookin good. 23
She now had me planted down on the bed, her sexy slender body on top of mine. Our lips touched and in less than a second I could remember why I'd been with her. It had been months since I had tasted those soft luscious lips that captivated my soul. 24
I began to massage her now fully erect breasts and felt her body shiver. Within minutes, she had come out of her tank top and skirt, and all that was left were her silky red panties. My tongue was playin with her erect caramel nipples. My hands had found their way to her thighs and they slowly crept closer, closer, closer. Automatically, her legs began to spread wider with every inch. Her body gave another shiver as my hands reached her most inner thigh about a centimeter away from her soaking wet panties. She closed her eyes.25
"You sure about this?" I whispered in her ear.26
She rolled me on top of her and said, "Yeah, I'm ready." 27
I removed her panties and began to massage her clit. I played with it until I could feel it begging me to enter. I slowly slid one finger deep inside of her. I felt her body respond immediately.28
"mmmmm" she moaned softly, as I rocked my finger in and out of her wetness. Then I slid another finger in. 29
"oooohhhh yesssssss," she breathed in my ear. I began to rapidly increase the speed. She arched her back to give me a better vantage point. My fingers were submerged deep into her wetness, thrusting, pounding. Her moans began to grow in volume. I slowed down a just little bit, remembering that we couldn't be too loud. Her hands were clenching the sheets as her breathing began to pick up, her body was shaking, and I could tell she was close to the orgasm she'd been yearning for.30
"Stop," she said grabbing my arm. "Not yet."31
She then reached into my pants and began to pump my already hard cock. It felt so good that I closed my eyes as she began to pump harder, faster. Her hand felt so soft as it elegantly moved up and down my shaft. I was just about to explode in her hand, and I wasn't sure why, but she stopped. 32
"Fuck me!!!" she said. 33
I opened my eyes and she was laying on her back, with her legs spread wide. Her pussy was dripping wet, sitting there waiting to be pounded. I slid my hard, throbbing cock into her hot, wet pussy. We both moaned softly, completely overwhelmed with the pleasure we were witnessing. Faster, faster, faster. Harder, harder, harder, I went in and out and in and out.34
"yessss, yessss" she whispered. Once again I could tell she was close to an orgasm. 35
"yesssss, yesssss," the moans grew louder. She arched her back, ready for the most breath taking cum of her life. My cock was rock hard and I too, was close to releasing. I put one of her long flexible legs over my shoulder and continued to thrust in and out of her. Again the sounds of her moans began to get louder and louder, but this time I didn't care. Nothing was going to stop this orgasm from being the best orgasm ever.36
"ooooh yessssss." 37
She bit down on my shirt to hold back a scream, as she came all over my throbbing cock. Her tightened muscles heightened my pleasure as I pounded her harder, feeling her released juices until I came into her hot, satisfied pussy.38
For a minute we just laid there in each others arms. 39
"That was amazing!!!" she said breathlessly.40
"Yeah, that was fire."41
Just then I looked at the clock. It was midnight.42
"Damn, I better be gettin home. You know I got school in the mourning."43
"Yeah I know."44
I got dressed and she walked me to the door. She gave me the most passionate kiss I could ever imagine.45
"Call me," she said as we kissed goodbye.46
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Author notes
This is my first short story so please let me know what you think.
A contest entry
- Passion!!! by Rebel Rebel.
176 points, ended May 18, 2006, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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You don't look like the person who would write that. It was good, and I didn't know what to expect coming from you. Awesome!!!!
language: 5, overall: 7.
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wow
that was really good. very intertaining lol. good write and keep it up. it was awsome.
ashleyoverall: 9.
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Boy meets girl.
I guess somethings are not over just because there has been a break up. Timing is everything. You got the pussy after the fact. I would be interested to know in what instrument you won the solo competition. I assume it could be the flesh flute. Smile.
Your style of English for this piece was heady and rather rural and lent a real appeal.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 6, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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great
I really liked that story. Can't wait to see the second half of it. That reminds me of what me and u know who had going on. Tell him I miss him! Thanks!
Keep up da good work!beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, overall: 10, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I'm actually supprised that you did a story, and it was good...not that you can't write. I just thought you would never come to my part of the world to explore a new world unventured....somethin like that. Anyway it part one was pretty hot, and I am really lookin forward to the next installment.
overall: 8.
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Excellent
WOW... that is great, especially for your first story.... It didnt Quite Give me the Fire that a few speak on... but may be just because i am a Lesbian.... However... i do have to say you do have a very gripping style... and hope that... soon... in the near future... when i actaully pull my finger out and type out some of my Lesbian Erotica, (which all seems to be in books at the moment) you would enjoy my style also....
Keep up the good WORK...
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u said part 1? so theres a part 2? my words cant suffice, very hot, steamy and sexy though. damn
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v.good
this is very good, but i do have to say that the dude was a vey quick finisher if he only got a hand job anda quicky and then he cumed, that is the only thing that bothers me with this, other than that this is a very good and quite discriptive piece, well done keepon writting and peace out,
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Wow, that was really good. I liked it a lot. For your first story you did VERY well.. mmmm I will definately be adding you to my favorite list!
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This is your first story?!?!?!?!? Wow! You're very good! Keep penning on, sweet friend!
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For this to be your first story, we found this to be quite erotic and quite sexy! Very very well done and very passionate! Bravo!
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damn baby hot fire...I was feelin it...got me ready to leave skool and call my man...lol...damn sexy. I'm speechless to be your first story that shit was on point...i gotta few stories I'm ready to let yall tear into...you should like them since we both think alike...lol...great write baby hot to death.
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so when were u gon tell me about this huh?!lol I guess we dont tell each other about what we write n e more huh well I been in kind of a rut but I been thinkin about writn some stories myself. I got this one where me and my girl go to six flags when i get it down on paper u gon like it. But back to the story maaaaaaaaan that was smooooooooookin hooooooooot my nig u a beast obviously and that was only yo 1st story keep it up next time fill me in on what u gon do or else we gotta a problem got it? good. holla!!!!!
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Wow that was pretty good. Very sexy. Keep it up...in your writing that is.
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your first story? That was hell hot! I'm sooo envious of that chick! I wish I was the one getting sum of that! Lol. That had my eyes hooked to the computer screen, drawing in every line, word for word. Awesome story, awesome characters and the detail.....hot and very very sexy!
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your first story? That was hell hot! I'm sooo envious of that chick! I wish I was the one getting sum of that! Lol. That had my eyes hooked to the computer screen, drawing in every line, word for word. Awesome soty, awesome characters and the detail.....hot and very very sexy!
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Uh Oh! claps go head!!!! i love it!
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well that was yummy
just to let you know there are a couple of typos 1 or 2 it was kinda funny it's near the begginning and it says something about HER erection instead of HIS i had to do a double take
it amused me
wonderful hot story overall
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very nice for your first story! I am new to this also so i know how hard it is to write your first story but you did great!
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this is great, well written, keep up the good work
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