Prologue

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The battle for this planet has just begun. Hell and Heaven; the Angels against the Vampires who will win the battle? The showdown has begun in many of the countries the Tournaments of Compenso which in English means balance. Some others call it Tournament of Revelation; the 50 best fighters from around the world come together. 25 of them angels, from heaven sent to protect by god, and 25 vampires, the devils evil dealers in this world. They gather from around the world at an island called Addico, a great temple awaits these 50 guests to be chosen, hand selected by the Elders. They join in the temple to decide who will come randomly. The rules, well guidelines must be strictly followed. Each contestant must be drawn from the gauntlet of Addico. A large gauntlet made of diamond and gold, inscribed with latish words. Many of the fighters don’t even know how to fight when drawn; many are just getting out of high school. Some still in high school. 2

One of the many named Nick, a ripped boy at the age of 19 in his senior year of high school. His hair is cut in a fade, hair color brown and his eyes a hazel of silver and green or brown, depending on his mood. Nick is no taller than 5’9” and is very speedy. But I won’t tell his story, I will let him…3

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This is just something i started to jot down. It's a first person sotrie, my first. I would like to know if you guys would want me to write more? if so leave a comment...

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  • Embitter
    June 9, 2008

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    wow thats a lot of fantasy crammed into one explosive thingie of exlposion.

    well, i suppose this isn't going to be read or edited..so..

    w00t vampires and angels and craziness., oh my of doom


  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    Some issues:

    "...Hell and Heaven; the Angels against the Vampires who will win the battle?"

    Use a ";" b/w Vampires and "who"

    "ripped boy"? Meaning...?

    Wow, definitely interesing. Go ahead, write more