the real story of greg thunderman

you all know the original story of greg thunderman. but let's go deeper. Greg was a good man at heart. even if he did set fire to puppies. and even if he was a necrophiliac. and even if he did kill JFK. and even if he was a cannibal. he still had everyone's best interests at heart.1

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  • Hyperbole
    October 31
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    This is kind of random and I can't say I agree. I would have liked it if you'd supported this.

  • secretpart
    March 18
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    lol, very random!

    I liked it very much! The only thing is to check your caps, because there was almost none.


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    November 4, 2008

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    haha, this made me laugh, I didn't know how to take it at first, but I read it again and it made me laugh, haha, great job, I espically loved the last bit, great job =DD

    -Dani


  • Tiger-Lily
    July 20, 2008

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    Oh my god, this is freaking hilarious, no offense. I like this, although the puppy bit sucked.

    Omg, Fal. Nice first comment, btw.

    -HT


  • Patchwork Comedy
    July 20, 2008

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    Wow... this is so randomly weird it made me laugh out long for a while.. seriously and especially after reading fal's comment and attempting to read the one before it... very funny.. you should write a story liek this I WOULD DEFINATELY read taht!!!


  • Embitter
    June 9, 2008

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    I'd do it.
    Incedentally, I want to write a story about a cannibalist presidential assassination.

    Dick Cheney would make an interesting antagonist, I think.

    But GW Bushe would taste stringy.

  • willay
    March 31, 2006
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    unbelievable

    the beginning of this story completely drew me on. There was no way I was gonna stop reading after the brilliant line "but let's go deeper." Pure genious! As I continued to fall in love with every word and letter of this story, the ending came and hit me in the face. I could not get over the brilliance of it. The character developement was fantastic. I loved how we got to know greg better as the story developed. The words seemed like they had each been hand crafted and observed from every angle before they could be put into this story. It painted a picture in my mind that will stay there forever. "And even if he was a cannibal". Genious. Thank you for this.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

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