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He came around at 10 and they went out into his car. 2
He escorted her into her seat and then drove them somewhere. He then blind folded her to make sure it was a true surprise.3
They whole time he was walking her she heard him whisper things about her, that he loved. She knew that moving here was the best thing that could ever happen.4
They were of course the perfect couple. He was cute and funny, while she was beautiful and smart.5
He took her out to the park. 6
"This is my favourite spot to be. Anytime I'm not at home, I'm usually here." he said kissing her forehead softly.7
"Well I guess it is both of ours now." she said quietly into his ear.8
They hung out all day at the park, and when it started to rain they jumped for joy. Finally they could dance in the rain. The kissed and talked, ate and laughed. Everything was perfect.9
but then she saw him. The person she was keeping from him. He ex teacher, her stalker, and the pedophile.10
He had found her.11
To be continued.12
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Comments
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Great foreshadowing! This was the first one that I read, but good job!
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Oooh, haven't read the earlier bits, but seems definitely intriguing. Great ending, btw!
-HT
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Uhh.... I havent read the previous parts so now i must go do taht.. seemed interesting from what i read of this one... few grammar mistakes but besides that its good keep up the good work
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the beginning was so sweet! they really seemed like the perfect couple.. but then..woah! the end surprised me! continue this!
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