128The Lure of Flesh & Blood2
It was midnight; Count James, a strong six foot tall man wearing black leather pants, white shirt and a long black coat, heard the chimes of the bells in the distance, a tranquil night and a silver-platted full moon enchanting the motionlessness darkness surrounding him. 3
It was time for seduction and as he was preparing to walk out of the dark ally he heard steps approaching from his left side. Retreating into the shadows he searched for the source producing the noise. And what a fantastic source she was. A brunette five foot six inches little lady... her beautiful lips shinning from the lip gloss she had just applied, "A perfect makeup..." he thought to himself and smiled. He kept browsing her body, she was wearing a black dress which outlined her perfect curves and stomach, and the high heel shoes she was wearing gave her an extra three inches which indicates she was around five foot three inches tall.4
He observed her as she walked by him, and as she did he was able to smell the scent of her sweet perfume mix with her feminine essences. Count James closed his eyes and inhaled her fragrance contently and satisfied. 5
Count James made no noise and as she kept walking he came out of the shadows and followed her quietly, keeping a fair distance between them. He did not want to make his presence noticed for it would only scare her away. He walked slowly on the other side of the street keeping an eye on her. He watched as this fair and gorgeous maiden fixed her dress when she was getting ready to enter the Mansion club.6
The club was a nice place to meet certain people... only "la crème de la crème" of society frequented this place which he knew very well. He watched her from the other side of the street enter the club and as she did he walked slowly to the entrance of this place. Passed the entrance he scrutinized the place carefully and sat on one of the booths. The waitress came around and asked if he wanted a drink as to what he responded, "the usual" which was an indication that he too frequented this place normally. The waitress nodded and walked away.7
He kept looking around and saw the lady in the black dress by the bar ordering a drink. He watched the bartender preparing her drink, "humm, a Malibu" he thought to himself.8
The night went by and the girl was still sitting there alone. He stood up walked to her and asked if she would dance with him. She did not resist his magnetism and giving her hand, she walked to the dance floor with him. They dance for a few minutes and had a lot of fun. After the music was over he returned her to the place she was sitting at... but before she sat Count James invited her to sit with him in the dark corner booth he was sitting at. She accepted and in a gentleman like manner he led her to the booth. She sat first and then he sat beside her.9
The waitress came around and he asked her to bring the lady a Malibu and for him another Martini. She looked at him in disbelief; he knew what she was drinking, meaning that he had been watching her. The waitress walked away to get the drinks and he turned to her and smiled. "Thank you for the dance..." "ummm... I do not know thy name fair maiden." he said looking into her eyes. 10
She was in a trance with his features and his gorgeous face but she managed to reply to him, "Uh, my name? Oh yes, my name is... my name is Elle" she said nervously.11
He laughed as he sensed the tension in her voice. "Calm down Elle," he paused for a second. "My name is James, it is nice meeting you" he said shaking her hand.12
The waitress came with their drinks and they cheered for a wonderful night. She had two sips from her drink and kept staring at him. "Do you come here often?" he asked looking away as if he was not aware of her gawking at him.13
"I moved here two weeks ago, two blocks down the streets from here. It is the first time I come to this place." she said almost shouting over the music.14
"Two weeks, huh?" he said out loud. "So you are new in town, I could show you so many places and so many things" he said again but she couldn't here what he had said as he said it not to her but to himself.15
He looked at her again and complimented her beautiful face, she smiled shyly. Elle moved a little closer to him complaining that she was cold. He soon after placed his coat over her body and pulled her even closer to him. James' arms were now around her waist. He looked at her attentively but she couldn't resist his gaze and looked down. James grabbed Elle by the chin with one hand and made her look at him. He placed a gentle kiss on her lips which made her lose herself in a powerful bliss of desires. He then kissed her passionately running his hand down the side of her sensuous body. James could sense the vibrations of her moans in his mouth as she was returning that crushing kiss. He was able to taste and hear the blood rushing inside her veins. He ought to possess her.16
James seduced her with that kiss to the point of forgetness. Elle was in trance with his irresistible charm. His hand were now separating her legs and touching her the way she had never been touched before in her lifetime. His fingers were touching soft and wet places, and as he was touching her, she accommodated herself for better access. 17
Her thong was place to one side as his fingers were now running up and down her slit. He probed his fingers inside of her before he began to rub with his thumb her clit. Elle moved her hips on his fingers faster and faster... as he sank his fingers deeper and deeper inside of her... moving his thumb over her clit. He stopped kissing her lips and ran his tongue up and down the line of her jaw. He whispered in her ear, "Be mine, Elle..." "Cum for me." She was not able to resist his command and came to an explosive orgasm; she was in total ecstasy, lost in oblivion, her juices were flowing freely onto his hand and onto her thighs. She then closed her eyes and leaned on him.18
James hugged her body possessively as he brought his hand to his mouth to taste her juices to then offer his fingers to her. She suckled eagerly and he smiled at her. "Elle let us walk out of here. I want to take you to my place." She stood up and he had to hold her steady. She was still shaking.19
Minutes later they were at his house. He walked her in and soon after they walked inside she was ripping his close apart and his hers. They were both naked in no time. He kissed her as he had done at the club, with the same intensity and passion. They're lips were locked and their tongues entwined.20
James grabbed Elle by her hips and made her straddle him. He pinned her against the wall as he entered her forcefully. She let out a loud moan and buried her nails on his flesh. He felt the pain piercing and he lost himself into it. He pushed inside of her with more force stumping her back against the wall... he was now thrusting his manhood faster and faster... deeper and deeper inside of her. He was in total ecstasy and reaching climax.21
He could hear the pumping of her heart and could smell her blood but he was obligated to wait. He was at this point punishing himself. He could not have this mortal until he had reached his ultimate orgasm and as he was approaching that sublime moment, he seized Elle by the hair pulling her head back exposing her neck and right then when he came to that critical moment reaching his orgasm he buried his fangs on her neck. The scleras of his eyes were crimson color as he suckled the blood from her neck, satisfying his hunger, thirst and lust all at the same time.22
Elle's eyes went blank and her body went limp in his arms. James examined her lovingly. He then walked with her in his arms to the bedroom placing her in his bed. He lied by her contemplating how she was letting out the last of her breathes. He thought of her sweetness and how she gave in to his charm at the club and knew that if he revives her, she would be his slave for all eternity. He smiled at that idea.23
James proceeded to slash on his wrist just enough to let drops of his blood flow out freely. He let the crimson droplets fall into her mouth, some wetting her beautiful lips. "Do not fret my lover. We will be together for times without an end." He said to her sweetly as he heard the chimes of the bells in the distance, indicating that it was almost dawn and that he must sleep. He locked every door and window and lied once again beside her.24
"Until tonight my beloved one. Sleep well."25
Elba E. Cruz26
March 17th, 200627
Author notes
I would like to dedicate this story to my dear verses on flesh... who needed something uplifting to make his day.
The name I gave the Vampire on this story "James" is the real name of verses... which we so lovingly call him in some circles Jamie Pooh lol
Thank you dear for the inspiration. <333
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Comments
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Good Story
This was a hot story. The victim didn't put up much of a fight, but you went into her feelings and emotions. James, I feel you could have gone into further. His character seemed a little flat. I enjoyed this because of the suspense and erotica.beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 2, overall: 6, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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An erotic masterpiece sweet enchantress,you set the pace,the imagery and enable the reader to revel in anticipation until satiated upon the ending of your write...well done indeed!Love and light,Yvette
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WHEW....this made my heart pump faster and faster, I love vampire movies, and it was like i was reading the script of a scene for one!! This is truly an awesome write. The imagry is great, the setting, i like how you started this, it was a good incline for a twisted ending. I didn't expect this! Great write!
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Thank you for coming by to read Kristy... Blessed be, Nena
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Thank you so very much squirrelqueen for coming by to read this work. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading. Blessed be, Nena
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Thank you Aaron brother for such wonderful comment... I am very happy you enjoyed the reading of this work. Blessed be, Nena
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cooolness vampires..thank yoi for the link dear...i will have to come back and read this...
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wow... that was an entrancing story. it kept me absolutely transfixed til the very end.
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two things, on i need to find my eye balls they pop, out and second, i need help with my jaw, i can't get it off the floor.everytime i read something of your it proves your name, that is a great thing, keep it flowing cause i wanna see more
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Thank you Loves for coming by to read even though you were tired. I hope you come back to read it. Blessings, Nena
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Thank you MtnGirl for coming by to read and comment on this work. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading. Blessed be, Nena
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Well first of all, the picture drew me in...loved it. I am very interested in the story but my eyes are burning so bad! I am going to bookmark this to come back and read it so I know whats happening...very good thus far though
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What is it about vampires that is so seductive? This holds true once again. This is sexy as hell. I have to catch my breath! Great writing... suspenseful, erotic. Awesome job! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you very much Lisa for the wonderful comment and also for the heart warming applause. I am very honored to have your words gracing this board. Blessings, Nena
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Thank you brother Ktule for the beautiful comment and for the heart warming applause. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading of this work. Yes, I will continue to make a series of this story. I am sure it will be fun. Blessed be, Nena
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Thank you so very much Summer Dreams for the wonderful compliment. I am so very happy you enjoyed the reading of this work. It is a great pleasure to be validated. Blessings, Nena
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful comment and for the heart warming applause. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading of this work. Blessed be, Nena
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A+++
Ohh..this so romantic and wonderful...Well this poem is a great piece by you Nena..it's great.
Take Care Lisa
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SWEET!! I love this, vampires are one of my favs to write and read about...just wondering if you will be continuing this?...
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Wow, so yummy. I loved it, you had me captivated with every word. Mmm. Must read more of your stuff soon. So good. You are talented. Vampires are hot and you made this story so mmmmmm clap -
This was Great. SO sexy and sensual and yet it wasn't vulgar. Just fun and HOT! wow. Add more! I love vampire stories...especuially ones like this.
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Thank you so very much DarknessFleeting for coming by to read and for the wonderful comment. I have been thinking since I started this story to make a whole series out of it. That is why I left it open at the end with his promise to see her tonight. I have other works written for Vampires which I truly enjoyed writing. Blessed be, Nena
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Who can resist hot, erotic vamps? Nice job capturing the reader's attention. You could make a series of this easily.
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lol Earl... thank you for coming by to read this work. It is always a nice to read your comments. Blessed be, Nena
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HOTTER than my BLOOD PRESSURE in the HOTTEST
UNTIL TONIGHT MY BELOVED ONE, SLEEP WELL!
Now that is a fine last line to a sublime, divine, and tasty tale that an old vampire can realy sink his teeth into! Stay with me tonight , my dear - and I won't bite until we'll both ready to cum together! As always - an erotic, beautiful, and sensual piece! One of these day - you have to collect all of these pieces into a book or two that I would be more than willing to purchase and to read everynight before visiting dreamland!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Thank you so very much Sis Sandy for coming by to read this work. I am very happy you enjoyed the reading of it. Love ya! Blessed be, Nena Bug!!
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Thank you my dearest sister Sig for such wonderful comment and for the heart warming applause... it is always a pleasure to read your words. I am happy you enjoyed the reading. Blessed be, Nena
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Thank you Thebigreveal for the wonderful comment and for the heart warming applause. I am very happy you enjoyed the reaidng of this work. Blessed be, Nena
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lol thank you dear heart... I am glad you enjoyed it and liked it!! Blessed be, Nena Bug! <333
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Awesomely excellent piece of poetry! Good Lord, this was soooo goood! I loved it!
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very very nice
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I like this..... a real turn-on! (fans self) Vampires are hot and this story was sensual and sexy without being vulgar. Definitely erotic. I liked it a LOT, WOW! -
nice very descriptive...I like this very much and vampires are soo hot
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<3333333333333333 -eats you-
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