Bad Hair Day

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When you wake up in the morning, your hair is sticking up, depending on how short your hair is or how long. If there is a cow lick in your har, the cows are possibly playing with it, maybe even kissing it to make you glare. Maybe you didn't want to wake up that morning and were just being a lazy bum and not wanting to get up. The most likely reason of all was because maybe you lost your comb or your hair is too short to be sticking up.

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  • Ata Van Halen silver member
    2 days ago
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    Nice.

    This was cute and comical, and from experience, I know what its like to wake in the morning with the worst bed head of all, resorting the worst hair day ever. Those are the days a girl is thankful they invented hair ties/pony tails.

    Very cute, very good. Nice work!


  • Hyperbole
    October 31
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    This made me laugh. Not a story, per se, but it was ADORABLE.

  • secretpart
    March 18

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    lol, so random!

    I wonder, why the red font? Geez, who didn't have a bad hair day? Especially when your hair are short, for some mysterious reason. I liked this .


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    November 4, 2008

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    haha, the cow part made me laugh, great job, it was a cute peice =DD keep up the good work =DDD

    -Danii


  • terror
    May 27, 2008
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    I Enjoyed it. made me laugh particually the cows. short but to the point and very funny. well done.

    beginning: 3, language: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.


  • EmeraldDreams
    May 10, 2007

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    lol, crazy little write here!

    i think that our hair punishes us for being lazy, because if i get up late on my day off, i can guarantee that my hair will look awful all day long! lol


  • Token Massacre silver member
    September 17, 2006
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    Hahaha that's hilarious I like this. The only suggestion I would have is the "and not wanting to get up" is repetitive. Otherwise it's absolutely perfect. Thanks for posting this up

  • MovieFan
    March 25, 2006
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    thank you!

  • MovieFan
    March 25, 2006
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    thank you!


  • Heartofacircle
    March 20, 2006
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    michael this was so silly not so much amusing. but yes lol funny... change "har", to "hair" and your all set for this one keep up the stories

  • MovieFan
    March 20, 2006
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    it was not meant to be amusing, it emphasizing what it might be like having a bad hair day


  • elfflower1989
    March 17, 2006
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    Umm...ok. I didn't find it all that amusing.

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