submissive gypsy chapter 2

She slowly awoke in a haze remembering what she though must have been a dream it was to crazy to be real .......she knew when she opened her eyes she would be in her room alone. If she knew all of this why was she afraid to open her eyes and look? Why could she feel someone watching her? Finally she couldn’t take the suspense any longer and opened her eyes. She gasped out loud as she slowly realized what she had thought was a dream was in fact reality she has been kidnaped she was now in fact a slave to this man standing at the foot of her bed staring at her. Slowly she looked up at him only to find him smiling at her. “Good morning my pet I take it you slept well and the room was to your liking.” “Yes I l slept fine thank you” before she can say anything further she feels him slap her not hard enough to really hurt but hard enough to sting she looks up at him in shock he is frowning at her now” now didn’t we discuss this last night pet from now on you only speak to me as master don’t forget again or you will be punished do you understand.” She looks up at him with tears in her fear filled eyes and softly whispers “Yes master” her pride taking a huge hit just from having to say those words ...... she was born a gypsy she isn’t supposed to answer to anyone ...she is shaking from repressed anger she wants to lash out at him but knows better already. So she sits and waits for what he says next already plotting her ways to escape this place ... even thinking of all the pros of staying here such as a comfy bed and 3 meals a day and use of a shower daily she is terrified of this man there for she knows no matter what she has to get our before he ends up killing her . She thinks to her self I have to find a way out but I cant let on that I want to escape I need him to think im happy here so I will bid my time carefully and do as asked and when he least suspects it im out of here. She starts to smile to her self but quickly checks it when she remembers he is watching her. “Get up and get dressed my pet. I wish to introduce you to some people I will be watching you I expect you to only speak when spoken to don’t make eye contact unless I tell you to don’t do any thing without my permission are we crystal clear?” “Yes I understand master.”1

“Do you know what happens if you disobey me little one?” “ I will be punished? Master.”2

“Is that an question or a statement little one?” “An answer master I will be punished if I should displease you.” “Good girl now get dressed quickly.” She turns to the armoire which contains the clothing she was told to wear its is a green corset top with a long black skirt going all the was down to her ankle. She is dismayed to find there are no underwear with this outfit. She begins to undress when she feels his eyes watching her she turns to see him watching her every move carefully. “Is there a problem little one?”She begins shaking again as she answers no master there is no problem.”She begins to take her clothes off and as she reaches for the corset she is to wear today a single tear falls from her eyes and lands softly on her naked breast. She hears as he moves closer to her and she stiffens. He takes her by her shoulders and turns her around and looks into her eyes “ Pet why are you crying.” he says this as he takes his finger and runs it down her cheek, her neck and over the top of her breast wiping the tear from her body. She gasps as his cool hands touch her warm breast. She looks away in embarrassment and begins to blush no man has ever touched her this way before and she didn’t understand the feelings she was having they terrified her more then this man did.3

He runs his finger from the top of her breast up her neck and under her chin raising her head and causing her to look him in the eye “ I asked you a question pet I expect an answer.” “ Im sorry master I am just not used to living here I miss my home I miss my friends.” He smiles sweetly to her and she nearly melts seeing this. “ This is now your home and I will give you new friend matter of fact that is who we are going to meet when you finish getting dressed come down as soon as your ready.” “Yes master.” She sighs as she hears him close the door leaving her alone to her thought she was so confused she didn’t understand or want the feelings his touch brought her. She didn’t like the way his eyes or his smile made her knees go weak. She knew she wanted out of this house she wanted to go back to her life a gypsy free roaming not having anyone telling her what to do. She needed her friends she was confused and she felt so alone she quickly finished getting dressed. When she was finally ready she looked in the mirror then collapsed on the floor in tears her sobs shaking her entire body. She was afraid of what she was beginning to feel for this man she has originally though of as a monster she had to get out before she was stuck here for the rest of her life she knew she couldn’t leave yet not till he trusted her but she had to get out she just had to bid her time until the perfect moment. She went in the bathroom and splashed a little water on her red swollen eyes and headed for the door she sighed as she opened the door that would lead to her new life or at least the life she will lead for now ...........4

(keep checking back for chapter three the more people who like it the sooner it will get written)5

Author notes

well several people seemed to enjoy the first part so i though i would add the next chapter hope you enjoy this one as much its probably not very good but hey if you like it enjoy  and thanks to my many friends and loyal reader who read my stuff often i really appreciate the love an dthe critism it makes me a better writer

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  • Sin Heart Tom
    March 18, 2006
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    i love the suspense. keep it coming!!


  • vampiry Julianna
    March 17, 2006
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    keep it comeing....please!!!! this is an amazingly awesome write your only two chapters in and already there is so much life to the charaters i can hardly wait for the next chapter
    keep up the great work
    vampiry julianna


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    March 17, 2006
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    Bring on the next chapter hon.. .but you may want to break the paragraphs into smaller ones and work on the dialog parts as well. That will make it much easier for all to read and follow along with.

  • Tatianna Valcor
    March 17, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Ponders what is going to happen next to our little Gypsie Hmm, So far so good. I love the way you are writing this story. She is sad and oddly turned on by her new Master. Great job expressing your emotions in her. Wonderful really. I cannot wait until Chapter 3 comes out.. You are talented and I have added you to my Fav list. I promise to keep watching for more of this wonderful tale that is unfolding before my eyes... Kepp up the good work..


  • kummie
    March 17, 2006
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    This was a great story! I liked the way You left us wondering. The only problem i saw is some of the words are off to the left of the page making them hard to see but thats not your fault..good luck witht he next part


  • britt-chere
    March 17, 2006
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    thank you babe i appreciate the comment im glad you approve what you think of the story means alot to me

  • britt-chere
    March 17, 2006
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    thanks babe i appreciate all your support yes both of these chapters have been written in the wee hours of the morning so excuse the spelling and such ill fix it when i hav ethe time as it seems the only tiem ive been inspired to wirte is early in the morning no matter if im in bed or not when it hits me i get up and write i hope its good enough though love britt

  • necremuusd
    March 17, 2006
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    great job

    great job britt, youre building suspence in the story, i like that. its getting even more interesting.

  • Broken N Lost
    March 17, 2006
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    I love this chapter just they way it keeps me in suspence. I hope to read more to this story. It is rare when I just want to know what happens next. You are a great writter. Don't worry about missed words or spelling you can just fix that later. Besides its 3 am so dont worry about it.
    Keep On Writting.


  • britt-chere
    March 17, 2006
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    enjoy peoples

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