The Submissive Gypsy

The fall sun was shining down on her causing her to sweat more then before. Rosa had always been very independent always pushing her bounds with her parents when she was younger and now she traveled with her friends fellow gypsies. She had noticed the young man watching her throughout the day as she ran her "fortune telling booth" at the fair but he had not once walked over to speak with her. The fair was closing now as she began closing down the booth she looked up and noticed no one was around she figured they must be off filling their trucks and trailers with their things preparing to leave for the next fair. Sighing she thought how grand is the life of a gypsy no strings nothing holding me down. Her thoughts were ended rather rudely when someone from behind her shook her slightly " excuse me miss " said the stranger who had been watching her earlier she had noticed him because of his looks. He was striking he had raven colored hair much like her own and piercing green eyes he was tall at least six foot 2 inches which was extremely tall to her five foot three inches . . . and from what she could see through his extremely tight T-shirt the man was made of pure muscle. And from the form fitting black jeans he had a nice ass and wasn’t lacking in the manly areas either . . . these thoughts ran through her mind when she beamed her patented brilliant smile at him " Yes sir how may I help you. We are just closing but if you would like your fortune told im sure I could squeeze you in right now." He looked down at her and the only word he says is "Giovanni."1

She starts as she realizes the word he said was her last name . . . she looks in his eyes for a moment then replies " Yes I am Rosa Giovanni who are you exactly and how do you know me?" He smiles at her and says " My name is Nikolai and I am here to claim you as mine Giovanni were born to serve under my family as slaves." She looks at him thinking wow what a fruit cake he continues talking though now shes only half listening. 2

She looks at him " listen mister im sorry to inform you but I have been free and independent my entire life and I plan on staying that way so pick someone else to be your slave because I did not sign up for the job."3

He replies to her rambling by smiling and saying simply " well then it’s a good thing I didn’t give you a choice isn’t it" after saying this he grabbed her around the waist and puts his other hand over her mouth so as not to attract attention as she tries to scream. Finally he makes it with the flailing women to his car and puts her in the back seat . . . he slides in the driver’s seat as he begins to explain the rules she will follow. "Rule one you will at all times call me master nothing else. Rule two you will at all times wear a collar it’s in the seat next to you please put it on now as you do not want me to do it for you. Rule three you will do everything I tell you to do that includes cleaning, cooking and being my personal sex slave you will follow all commands when I think of them and for now these are the only rules I think necessary your training which is sadly lacking will begin six am sharp tomorrow morning do I make myself clear. Also If any of the rules I stated are broken or you displease or embarrass me in any way you will be punished severally do you understand . . . I see him glance back in the mirror so I nod as to not make him mad sitting there I think oh what have I gotten myself into this time. I glance out the window to see a beautiful home come into view with many people standing in the yard or standing on the steps of the house 4

"I hope you like it as this is your new home I do not live here full time though I will be staying until you are trained properly . Then if you please me I may take you with me if you displease me I will either leave you here or sell you to a much harsher master." I can feel the tears filling my eyes as he says this I am completely terrified as to what to come but I look up at the house and at the people then I look up in your eyes as you help me out of the car and some how I know that he would never harm me more then necessary and I trust him to keep me safe from harm and now with his arms around me he lead me to my new room I know that I have found a place were maybe I will belong I am no longer a gypsy roaming free but a slave to my master . . . I look at the beautiful room you have had prepared for me then I look at you I look in your eyes and you kiss me at first I resist but I feel you hands on my back . . . I slowly melt into the kiss I feel you move away from me as I look at you . . . you ask one question " How sexually experienced are you my pet" I blush fiercely as I look down to the ground I whisper " I am a virgin. I have no sexual experience*." *I look up to see you smiling " It’s alright my pet nothing to worry about tonight I will allow you to sleep but your lessons will begin in the morning very early so you should get a shower and head to bed. Pet I can promise you tomorrow* *night when I am finished with you. You will no longer be able to say you are inexperience since you will no longer be a virgin. Everything you will need tonight is in this room there is a small fridge with snacks as well as drinks should you need something. There is a night gown as well as under things and an outfit I expect you to be wearing tomorrow. There are towels and other things in the bathroom.* *Goodnight for now my pet I will see you in the morning." You lean over and press your lips to mine just when I am melting into the kiss I feel you leave and when I open my eyes you are gone I try the door knob only to find it locked. I sigh as I lay back on the bed and think about the man who had basically kidnaped me tonight though I was now happy I was here even still I was frightened and nervous about the coming day I closed my eyes and drifted off to sleep thinking about tomorrow and the possibilities of what may happen ............................................* 5

(Keep checking for chapter two if you wanna know what happens to rose and her new master)6

Author notes

hey yall please comment on this first chapter of the story this is the first "erotica" piece i have posted on this site though as you can see it hasnt gotten to the erotica part just yet so i guess you'll have to check back for the next chapter and if you dontlike this piece then dont come read the next one  also if it is as bad as i think it is forgive me im attempting to get overs writers block after a long stint of being unable to  write  . . . love britt

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  • britt-chere
    March 16, 2006
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    omg i really was not expecting for people to like this when i wrote it at 4 in the morning thank you all for your kind words and support as well as constructive critism i feel like im gonna cry lol love britt

  • Broken N Lost
    March 16, 2006
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    Great story and it is not bad for the first chapter. I just could not stop reading. I love the way you write my beautiful Britt. You Always amaze me with your poetry and your story is magnificint. Keep On Writting.


  • Twisteddolly
    March 16, 2006
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    oooh this sounds like it will be a fun story, I will definatly check and see when you have added the next chapter. Hope to read more soon.

    Jessie


  • britt-chere
    March 16, 2006
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    your a goof you know that right

  • necremuusd
    March 16, 2006
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    great job

    you told me not to read it, after i already wrote, it, so theres a problem. you say its not any good, but i think otherwise youre good britt, just admit it, you know it, and i know it. great job

  • britt-chere
    March 16, 2006
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    thank you everyone for your support im glad you approve and i will do my best to have chapter 2 up asap love britt


  • kummie
    March 16, 2006
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    ok ..is it tomorrow yet? i wanna know what happens...lol great story and very well written! i cant wait to read the next one

  • TurnTheKnife
    March 16, 2006
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    hmm...it's very good
    I like it
    :]

  • Tatianna Valcor
    March 16, 2006
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    good

    I liked it, I think that you are getting somewhere, I plan on adding you to my favorite list so I can see where you go next. Mmm I LOVE Master and slave stories. So fun. Keep it up, it sounds wonderful so far...

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