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*_First Year_* 3
*part one*4
It my first year at Hogwarts.I had grown up there since my grandfather,Albus Dumbledore who was the head master and had raised me,because my father had left my mother before I was born.This left my mother completely helpless after she had me,and Voldemort had taken this opportunity to kill Albus Dumbledore's only child and grandchild.My mother was killed,and I was left with a lightning bolt scar directly over my heart.Harry Potter might have been the only known person to have survived the killing curse,but that didn't mean that he was the only one.Voldemort had been weakened by this,but not enough to stop him.This was the reason he had been disembodied when he had tried to kill Harry.After my mother died I went to live with my god parents which by coincidence were the Potters.When they were killed I had been left in the care of my grandparents Albus Dumbledore and Minerva Mc Gonagall,my father's mother.5
Over the summer I had been staying at the Weasley's.I borded the Hogwarts Express with Ron,and soon was sitting in the compartment with him and Harry Potter.When asked my name by Harry I told him it which is Hope Mc Gonagal.I will never forget the first time I met Hermione Granger.I'm pretty sure there was a look of disgust on my face,because when she left Harry began laughing.Hermione is the nosiest,most annoying person I've ever met.6
We where at Hogwarts.I followed Ron and Harry out carrying my trunk,my pitch black owl,Jim Bob,and my white cat,Muttai,I was allowed to have more than one animal and also a broom that was put safely away in my trunk.We stepped off the train.7
"Hello,Hagrid", I said cheerfully.8
And Hagrid replied," 'Ello, Hope. 'Ello Harry. " 9
I climbed in the boat with Harry, Ron, and a boy named Neville. I sat in the boat and looked at the place I had all ways loved,but now somehow it seemed different.We sailed along the lake and soon we docked.I got so nervous.What if the sorting hat put me in Slitheren like my father or Ravenclaw?I wanted so bad to be in Griffendor like my mother,but what if I wasn't?10
We walked in the building,and I saw my grandmother and calmed down slightly.We stood there while she went to do something,and this blond boy walked up to Harry and me.I could tell at once he had to be related to Lucius Malfoy,for like Lucius he was pale, blond, and had grey eyes.But unlike Lucius his eyes were sickly beautiful,and Lucius's were cold and icey.11
" I'm Malfoy,Draco Malfoy."12
My suspicions had been right.Then after Draco had said this Ron let out something between a snort and a laugh.Draco turned to him.13
" You think my names funny do you?"14
I could tell at once that I wouldn't like this boy.Before this could go any further,my grandmother returned.15
" Students we will now go into the Great Hall, but first ...." she told us the rules which no one except Hermione probably listened to.Then we entered. All of my nervousness returned.What if i was put in a different house then my friends?Then what would happen?16
They went through the list of names,then came my turn.I was shaking and was pretty sure I was blushing.Grandma placed the Sorting Hat on my head, and it began to talk.I said over and over in my head Griffendor, Griffendor, please put me in Griffendor.Then at last it shouted out Griffendor!I stood up quickly and went and sat down beside Fred and George.I was ecstatic.I was in Griffendor.17
Author notes
This is only the first year of the first year,so it's kinda like chapter one.The rest will come later.
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Comments
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ooo i like this! i love the point of veiw. usually i dont like origional characters but i like this. i cant wait to know where this story is going to go. i like that she is related to mcgonigal and stuff, it is an interesting set up there. but again, i cant wait for the next part ^_^
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Your story's intersting, please keep writting.
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