God's Masterpiece

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From graceful lilies pure and white,2

God fashioned lovely skin,3

Figments he chose for eyes,4

Then formed your baby chin.5

He took a tulip bright and red --6

'Twas one that did not fade;7

A softer, sweeter little mouth8

Before was never made.9

Another flower next He used --10

A rosebud, pink and fair;11

Touched it to your dimpled cheeks12

And bade it blossom there.13

Then with His magic fingers picked14

Two morning glories white;15

Curled and shaped your little ears,16

Soon they were fastened tight.17

That crowning bit of golden down18

Will soon become your hair;19

He gathered pollen from the flowers,20

And sprinkled it with care.21

For dainty little fingers dear22

And precious, tiny toes,23

He used slender daisy frills;24

A snowdrop made your nose.25

This world and all within it26

He created here for man;27

But Baby was "God's Masterpiece"28

Since time and life began!29

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  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    July 25

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    I have to agree with Terror, it was very soothing for me.

    Gentle and sweet. I love that you used flowers, they're beautiful and perfect for this. Wonderful job!


  • terror
    May 27, 2008
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    a very calm and gentle poem, I like it, it's very relaxing.


  • Ninth-Poet
    April 10, 2006
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    intriguingly interesting

    a very interesting piece of poetry!
    -Keep the ink flowing!
    -Dave

    overall: 7.

    • lovin-justin
      April 11, 2006
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      thank you i will keep the ink flowing thank you for the comment


  • michelleperez25
    March 23, 2006
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    good

    thats great your good


  • GhostPoems
    March 16, 2006
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    Beautiful! This is precious! I loved the way you worded this, great great great job!

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